Hi there In my humble opinion, you should change the whole sentences.
On 09/04/07, Hou Pei <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > Hi, everybody > I read the following sentences in a newspaper but I don't think they are > grammatically correct. > Would you write me some suggestion? > > 1Their omnipresence means that their problems have stronger impact on > consumers than smaller firms, > and therefore, deserve more scrutiny. > My version: > Their omnipresence means that their problems have stronger impact on > consumers than smaller firms' > and therefore, deserve more scrutiny. > 2They should ensure they operate ethically and without double standards. > My version: > They should ensure they operate ethically > exclusive of double standards. > > Thank you > > Best Regards > Hou Pei > > > > > > -- Josney Curitiba Brazil Please leave a comment on my blog if you feel up to it : josneyfaryj.blogspot.com --~--~---------~--~----~------------~-------~--~----~ You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "Correct my English" group. To post to this group, send email to [email protected] To unsubscribe from this group, send email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/correct-my-english -~----------~----~----~----~------~----~------~--~---
