is this essay for ielts?
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>Television has had significant influence on the culture of many
>societies.To what extent would you say that television has positively
>or negatively affected the cultural development of your society.
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>It has been around forty years since television was first introduced
>into Australia and today day people still mixed.Many people believe
>that television damage culture, i agree with that because in the
>latest year television programe was quiet descent, which was based in
>programes like cultur of your country, apart of news,where people can
>learn different countries.
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>However, television network need to attract people and large audience
>to secure their financial survival.They must produce programe which
>are intersting to aboard.
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>Infact, we know that television in today day have negative effects
>such as crime, sex, wich can affect young people,either children will
>be learning bad and horible progames.
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>Nevertheless we much know as well that television does have positive
>effect on the cultur, with the society as well, and help to learn
>more , however it is also importante that you can learn different
>countries cultur.
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>In sum, I hold the view, that television promote an strengthens those
>cultur that are already in good position.
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