Olly:  i played around with your css last night using "edit css" from 
the Firefox web developers toolbar.

i don't particularly like the bricks either but if you made them to be 
unscrollable i think it would be neater.  just add "fixed" in where 
you're calling that image as background.  (i think you have repeat just 
add fixed after that).

also, you could add some background to the paragraphs (pick up one of 
the light grays from the bricks) and it becomes much more readable.  and 
yes, you need some leading in the paragraphs (spacing between lines) but 
i think David straightened that out for you.

cheers
Donna

oh, and that block of graphic text in the top-right.  you do need to 
re-do it and you can add leading in it too (at least with PS and I 
assume other graphic editors).  also, that second sentence doesn't 
exactly make sense, you should try re-wording it.  maybe type the whole 
thing out in Word and play around with it.

one other thing --- the "big Neale Marriott" at the top, probably should 
line its margin up with that graphic text box.  and while you're at it, 
if you're really going to keep the bricks, take out the white in the 
borders of that image, (and under Artist's Statement) its just 
distracting.

That's all. :)


olly wrote:

> On 11/19/05, David Laakso <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> 
>>-- The uppercase text in the header is /very/ difficult to read.
> 
> 
> i agree to an extent - i'll look at it again
> 
> 
>>-- The color of the blocks of content text(their black-whiteness, not
>>hue) would be improved with more lead. And same above/below paragraph
>>blocks.
> 
> 
> increase the letter spacing?  looks ok to me but i'll experiement
> 
> 
>>-- Superimposing the content text on the bricks does not help
>>readability(for me).
> 
> 
> do you mean the background to: http://www.nealemarriott.co.uk/contact.html
> 
> the client really wants that image used and it's the only place i
> could fit it in :)
> 
> 
>>-- My background color in Opera is set to fuchsia. Guess what...?
> 
> 
> background colour of what?!  how annoying.  is this a known opera bug?
>  works for me in opera 8
> 
> 
>>-- Lack of header text when images are disabled /may/ be an
>>accessibility issue.
> 
> 
> in the gallery picture nav you mean?
> 
> 
>>-- Curious. Who be Lylo?
> 
> 
> my company!
> 
> 
> thanks very much for your feedback david, much appreciated as always!
> 
> cheers.
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