Since a recent draft Stuart and I posted depends on this technology (https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dnssd-push-00), I thought I would do a careful review of draft-ietf-dane-srv-11.
Overall, the document is in really good shape. I found it to be clear and well
conceived. The appropriate references makes it easy to follow and fill in the
blanks of unfamiliar technologies.
I carefully read the document to help find any nits that need addressed. There
aren't many, but I found two. Neither of these are major issues.
1. Section 3.4, first paragraph, last sentence. "This affects the use TLS as
follows:". Maybe this is missing the word "of" before TLS?
2. Appendix A.2
_xmpp-client.example.com.
Shouldn't this be?
_xmpp-client._tcp.example.com.
That's all I could find.
Thanks,
Tom
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