Hi Tom, thanks for the review. I'm glad you didn't find any major issues. We'll fix those nits.
> On Mar 21, 2015, at 6:15 PM, Tom Pusateri <[email protected]> wrote: > > Since a recent draft Stuart and I posted depends on this technology > (https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dnssd-push-00), I thought I would do > a careful review of draft-ietf-dane-srv-11. > > Overall, the document is in really good shape. I found it to be clear and > well conceived. The appropriate references makes it easy to follow and fill > in the blanks of unfamiliar technologies. > > I carefully read the document to help find any nits that need addressed. > There aren't many, but I found two. Neither of these are major issues. > > > 1. Section 3.4, first paragraph, last sentence. "This affects the use TLS as > follows:". Maybe this is missing the word "of" before TLS? > > 2. Appendix A.2 > _xmpp-client.example.com. > > Shouldn't this be? > > _xmpp-client._tcp.example.com. > > That's all I could find. > > Thanks, > Tom > > _______________________________________________ > dane mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dane _______________________________________________ dane mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dane
