Hi, here is the usermanual with Ammon's proofreading changes added to chapter 1:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/aoq5w82i9qngwuk/darktable-usermanual-130226.pdf I only left out very few structural changes - they are not forgotten but deserve a closer look once we have the major bugs fixed. So, if anybody wants to go deeper into chapter 1 as a second voice, please go ahead. Please don't overcharge me with too many changes :) The number of bugs detected by Ammon already in chapter 1 is much higher than I expected. I fear, there is a lot more to come for chapters 2 to 7 ... Ulrich Am 25.02.2013 19:00, schrieb Ammon Riley: > Hi Ulrich, > > I finished to the end of Chapter 1 this weekend. > > https://www.dropbox.com/s/7q86cmgvvmm5oxr/darktable-usermanual-130219-ch1.pdf > > What do you use for annotating pdf files? I was greatly dissatisfied > with okular, and couldn't find anything better on Linux, so I ended up > using Adobe software on my iOS device. On Linux, the annotations display > best using acroread. > > By and large, it's been fairly reasonable. I think the bulk of the > annotations are relating to use of "you" and "your", which doesn't feel > right for a manual. That, and inserting commas. :) > > I more-or-less followed the proofreading marks, here: > > http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_4v7fLJoD-gM/TTM3gkU3H2I/AAAAAAAABIU/UjJ-y1gkb2Y/s1600/proofreading.jpg > Some of my 'insert comma' marks were above the line, so look like > 'insert apostrophe', but it should be pretty obvious I meant comma. > > Any questions, just ask. > > Rob -- I think it would be good to have a second set of eyes look over > my annotations. Some of what I'm suggesting could just be my personal > style (which is North American-centric), as opposed to fixing something > egregiously wrong. > > Cheers, > Ammon ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Everyone hates slow websites. So do we. Make your web apps faster with AppDynamics Download AppDynamics Lite for free today: http://p.sf.net/sfu/appdyn_d2d_feb _______________________________________________ darktable-devel mailing list [email protected] https://lists.sourceforge.net/lists/listinfo/darktable-devel
