Hi Osamu,
this is round 3 of my proposals for the DR.
You may want to fix at least one point before the next upload:
see line 189 of attached diff.
Cheers
Holger
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--- debian-reference.pot 2013-04-06 22:24:42.259034246 +0200
+++ debian-reference_proposed-changes.pot 2013-04-06 23:24:13.787035964 +0200
@@ -4,13 +4,13 @@
# FIRST AUTHOR <EMAIL@ADDRESS>, YEAR.
#
#, fuzzy
msgid ""
msgstr ""
"Project-Id-Version: PACKAGE VERSION\n"
-"POT-Creation-Date: 2013-04-06 22:23+0300\n"
+"POT-Creation-Date: 2013-01-10 21:56+0900\n"
"PO-Revision-Date: YEAR-MO-DA HO:MI+ZONE\n"
"Last-Translator: FULL NAME <EMAIL@ADDRESS>\n"
"Language-Team: LANGUAGE <l...@li.org>\n"
"Language: \n"
"MIME-Version: 1.0\n"
"Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8\n"
@@ -9352,16 +9352,18 @@
"<citerefentry><refentrytitle>aptitude</refentrytitle><manvolnum>8</"
"manvolnum></citerefentry> for an interactive text interface to manage the "
"installed packages and to search the available packages."
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><itemizedlist><listitem><para>
+### HW: update-manager works basically under other desktop environments, too.
msgid ""
"<citerefentry><refentrytitle>update-manager</refentrytitle><manvolnum>8</"
-"manvolnum></citerefentry> for keeping your system up-to-date if you're "
-"running the default GNOME desktop."
+"manvolnum></citerefentry> for keeping your system up-to-date; it is mainly "
+"aimed for being used in the default GNOME desktop, but basically works under "
+"other desktop environments as well."
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><table><title>
msgid "List of Debian package management tools"
msgstr ""
@@ -9407,13 +9409,15 @@
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><table><tgroup><tbody><row><entry>
msgid "package management system for Debian"
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><table><tgroup><tbody><row><entry>
-msgid "graphical package manager (GNOME front-end for APT)"
+### HW: my proposal for update-manager also applies here: synaptic is also
+### HW: working fine under Xfce for example.
+msgid "graphical package manager (graphical front-end for APT)"
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><table><tgroup><tbody><row><entry>
msgid ""
"APT utility programs: <citerefentry><refentrytitle>apt-extracttemplates</"
"refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>, "
@@ -9485,13 +9489,13 @@
"responsible for the risk containment."
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#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><itemizedlist><listitem><para>
msgid ""
"Esoteric configuration may be manually enabled by the system administrator. "
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+"This may create interferences with popular generic helper programs for the "
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#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><title>
msgid "Basic precautions"
msgstr ""
@@ -9587,13 +9591,13 @@
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msgid ""
"You as the system administrator are responsible for your system in the end."
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><itemizedlist><listitem><itemizedlist><listitem><para>
-msgid "The long stability history of Debian system is no guarantee by itself."
+msgid "The long stability history of the Debian system is no guarantee by itself."
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><title>
msgid "Life with eternal upgrades"
msgstr ""
@@ -10072,13 +10076,13 @@
msgid "codename = <literal>&codename-nexttesting;</literal>"
msgstr ""
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msgid ""
"The history of codenames are described in <ulink url="
-"\"&debianfaqgdbwhiceenusedinthepast;\">Debian FAQ: 6.3.1 Which other "
+"\"&debianfaqgdbwhiceenusedinthepast;\">Debian FAQ: 6.2.1 Which other "
"codenames have been used in the past?</ulink>"
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#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><para>
msgid ""
"In the stricter Debian archive terminology, the word \"section\" is "
@@ -10086,15 +10090,15 @@
"area. (Although, the word \"main section\" may sometimes be used to "
"describe the Debian archive area named as \"main\".)"
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#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><para>
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-"Every time a new upload is done by the Debian developer (DD) to the "
+"Every time a new upload is done by a Debian developer (DD) to the "
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"compatible with the latest set of packages in the latest <literal>unstable</"
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msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><para>
msgid ""
@@ -10214,13 +10218,13 @@
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><para>
msgid "Debian is 100% free software because of the followings:"
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><itemizedlist><listitem><para>
-msgid "Debian installs only free software by default to respect user freedoms."
+msgid "Debian installs only free software by default to respect user's freedom."
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><itemizedlist><listitem><para>
msgid "Debian provides only free software in <literal>main</literal>."
msgstr ""
@@ -10328,14 +10332,14 @@
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><itemizedlist><listitem><para>
msgid "contamination of your 100% free Debian system"
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msgid ""
-"<ulink url=\"&debianfreesoftwareguidelines;\">Debian Free Software "
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+"Guidelines</ulink> are the free software standards for <ulink url=\"&debian;"
"\">Debian</ulink>. Debian interprets \"software\" in the widest scope "
"including document, firmware, logo, and artwork data in the package. This "
"makes Debian's free software standards very strict ones."
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"This is declared when this package provide all of the files and "
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#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><note><para>
msgid ""
-"Please note that defining, \"Provides\", \"Conflicts\" and \"Replaces\" "
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"ensures that only one real package providing this virtual package can be "
"installed at any one time."
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#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><table><tgroup><tbody><row><entry>
msgid "<literal>sensible-browser \"http://bugs.debian.org/\";</literal>"
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><table><tgroup><tbody><row><entry>
-msgid "The bug report of a known package name"
+### HW: http://bugs.debian.org/<package_name> shows all bugs for <package_name>, not just one
+msgid "The bug reports of a known package name"
msgstr ""
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msgid ""
"<literal>sensible-browser \"http://bugs.debian.org/<package_name>\";</"
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@@ -10929,13 +10934,14 @@
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msgid "<literal>aptitude full-upgrade</literal>"
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><table><tgroup><tbody><row><entry>
-msgid "<literal>apt-get dist-upgrade <package></literal>"
+### HW: there is no need to attach a package name for a dist-upgrade, right?
+msgid "<literal>apt-get dist-upgrade</literal>"
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><table><tgroup><tbody><row><entry>
msgid ""
"install candidate version of installed packages while removing other "
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msgid "<literal>apt-get autoremove</literal>"
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><table><tgroup><tbody><row><entry>
-msgid "remove auto-installed packages which is no longer required"
+msgid "remove auto-installed packages which are no longer required"
msgstr ""
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msgid "<literal>aptitude purge foo</literal>"
msgstr ""
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#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><table><tgroup><tbody><row><entry>
msgid "<literal>aptitude show foo</literal>"
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><table><tgroup><tbody><row><entry>
-msgid "<literal>apt-cache show <package></literal>"
+### HW: see next string, which refers to " package 'foo' "
+msgid "<literal>apt-cache show foo</literal>"
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><table><tgroup><tbody><row><entry>
msgid "display detailed information about \"<literal>foo</literal>\" package"
msgstr ""
@@ -11150,13 +11157,13 @@
"$ sudo aptitude -u\n"
"Password:"
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><para>
msgid ""
-"This updates the local copy of the archive information and display the "
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"configuration at \"<literal>~/.aptitude/config</literal>\"."
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><tip><para>
msgid ""
@@ -11436,12 +11443,18 @@
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><table><tgroup><tbody><row><entry>
msgid "<literal>Audit Recommendations</literal>"
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><table><tgroup><tbody><row><entry>
+### HW: Either use
+### HW: "list packages which are recommended by some installed packages but not yet "
+### HW: "installed"
+### HW: or
+### HW: "packages which are recommended by some installed packages but not yet "
+### HW: "installed are listed"
msgid ""
"list packages which are recommended by some installed packages but not yet "
"installed are listed"
msgstr ""
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@@ -11502,12 +11515,18 @@
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><table><tgroup><tbody><row><entry>
msgid "<literal>Upgradable Packages</literal>"
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><table><tgroup><tbody><row><entry>
+### HW: Probably there could some values be added to help the reader to understand,
+### HW: what is meant (since terms like "area" and "section" are somewhat common,
+### HW: and their meaning is not obvious in the first shot).
+### HW: For example:
+### HW: "list packages organized as <literal>section (admin, devel, doc ...)</literal> "
+### HW: "â <literal>area (main, contrib ...)</literal> â <literal>package</literal>"
msgid ""
"list packages organized as <literal>section</literal> â <literal>area</"
"literal> â <literal>package</literal>"
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><table><tgroup><tbody><row><entry>
@@ -11687,13 +11706,19 @@
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msgid "match archive"
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><table><tgroup><tbody><row><entry>
-msgid "<literal>~A{sarge,etch,sid</literal>}"
+### HW: sarge and etch are fairly old. Probably use some recent ones?
+### HW: They are only examples, I know, but newbie users from today will
+### HW: not know what "sarge" is supposed to be ...
+### HW: Or maybe use entities (&codename-stable;, &codename-testing;, &codename-unstable;),
+### HW: so that distribution names are kept actual automatically?
+### HW: This string is the same for all languages anyway.
-msgid "<literal>~A{wheezy,squeeze,sid</literal>}"
+msgid "<literal>~A{&codename-stable;,&codename-testing;,&codename-unstable;</literal>}"
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><table><tgroup><tbody><row><entry>
msgid "match origin"
msgstr ""
@@ -11749,13 +11774,13 @@
msgid "<literal>~i</literal>"
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><table><tgroup><tbody><row><entry>
msgid ""
"match installed packages with <emphasis role=\"strong\">A</emphasis>-mark "
-"(auto installed package)"
+"(auto installed packages)"
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><table><tgroup><tbody><row><entry>
msgid "<literal>~M</literal>"
msgstr ""
@@ -11907,12 +11932,17 @@
"citerefentry>, <citerefentry><refentrytitle>awk</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</"
"manvolnum></citerefentry> and <citerefentry><refentrytitle>perl</"
"refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>."
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><itemizedlist><listitem><para>
+### HW: a common notation for "depends, predepends, recommends etc." in the world of
+### HW: Debian is "dependency" (as it is in Chapter 2.1.6 for example), but here it
+### HW: is suddenly "relation".
+### HW: Change for consistency (globally for the document)?
+
msgid ""
"The relation <type> is one of (depends, predepends, recommends, "
"suggests, conflicts, replaces, provides)."
msgstr ""
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@@ -11973,13 +12003,13 @@
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><para>
msgid ""
"The selection of a package in <literal>aptitude</literal> not only pulls in "
"packages which are defined in its \"<literal>Depends:</literal>\" list but "
"also defined in the \"<literal>Recommends:</literal>\" list if the menu "
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+"\"<literal>F10</literal> â Options â Preferences â Dependency handling\" is set "
"accordingly. These auto installed packages are removed automatically if "
"they are no longer needed under <literal>aptitude</literal>."
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><note><para>
msgid ""
@@ -12113,24 +12143,33 @@
msgid ""
"You may want to do the similar in the interactive mode for fine grained "
"control."
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><para>
+### HW: In the Flat Package View the descripted method does not work:
+### HW: Applying a command (here purge via shortcut "_") on several packages
+### HW: at once does not work in the "New Flat Package View", but it works in
+### HW: the default "Package View" (tested with aptitude 0.6.3 from Squeeze).
+### HW: (or has this behaviour been changed in the aptitude version from Wheezy?)
msgid ""
-"You provide the regex \"<literal>~c</literal>\" in the \"New Flat Package "
-"List\" view with \"<literal>l</literal>\" prompt. This limits the package "
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"view only to regex matched packages, i.e., \"removed but not purged\". All "
"these regex matched packages can be shown by pressing \"<literal>[</literal>"
"\" at top level headings."
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><para>
+### HW: Viewing packages under the category "Installed Packages" makes no
+### HW: sense here, since you prompted to set a filter to "~c", which only
+### HW: shows removed, not purged packages. So the category "Installed
+### HW: Packages" is not visible, when filter "~c" is applied.
msgid ""
"Then you press \"<literal>_</literal>\" at top level headings such as "
-"\"Installed Packages\". Only regex matched packages under the heading are "
+"\"Not Installed Packages\". Only regex matched packages under the heading are "
"marked to be purged by this. You can exclude some packages to be purged by "
"pressing \"<literal>=</literal>\" interactively for each of them."
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><para>
msgid "This technique is quite handy and works for many other command keys."
@@ -12181,13 +12220,13 @@
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><orderedlist><listitem><para>
msgid ""
"Type \"<literal>l</literal>\" to enter the package display limit as "
"\"<literal>~i</literal>\" and type \"<literal>m</literal>\" over "
-"\"<literal>Tasks</literal>\" as manual installed."
+"\"<literal>Tasks</literal>\", to mark that packages as manual installed."
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><orderedlist><listitem><para>
msgid "Exit <literal>aptitude</literal>."
msgstr ""
@@ -12389,12 +12428,16 @@
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><table><tgroup><tbody><row><entry>
msgid "<literal>COLUMNS=120 dpkg -l <package_name_pattern></literal>"
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><table><tgroup><tbody><row><entry>
+### HW: 1. dpkg -l also gives an output, if the package is not installed, which
+### HW: means, that you can get the status for an uninstalled package too (status
+### HW: is "uninstalled" in that case), so drop that "installed".
+### HW: 2. I cannot see, what the sentence "for the bug report" is about. ???
msgid "list status of an installed package for the bug report"
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><table><tgroup><tbody><row><entry>
msgid "<literal>dpkg -L <package_name></literal>"
msgstr ""
@@ -12616,13 +12659,13 @@
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><caution><para>
msgid ""
"Lower level package tools such as \"<literal>dpkg -i â¦</literal>\" and "
"\"<literal>debi â¦</literal>\" should be carefully used by the system "
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+"administrator. They do not automatically take care of required package "
"dependencies. Dpkg's commandline options \"<literal>--force-all</literal>\" "
"and similar (see <citerefentry><refentrytitle>dpkg</"
"refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>) are intended to be "
"used by experts only. Using them without fully understanding their effects "
"may break your whole system."
msgstr ""
@@ -12673,12 +12716,17 @@
"\" and \"<literal>apt-cache showsrc</literal>\" commands require "
"\"<literal>deb-src</literal>\" entry in \"<literal>/etc/apt/sources.list</"
"literal>\"."
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><itemizedlist><listitem><para>
+### HW: reading this string the first time, I understood it as "the package dget
+### HW: depends on the package devscripts". But hey - that's what dpkg is about:
+### HW: to solve these dependencies automatically. So I investigated further and
+### HW: would propose this now: "To use dget, debuild and debi, you need to install
+### HW: the devscripts package."
msgid ""
"<citerefentry><refentrytitle>dget</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></"
"citerefentry>, <citerefentry><refentrytitle>debuild</"
"refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>, and "
"<citerefentry><refentrytitle>debi</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></"
"citerefentry> require <literal>devscripts</literal> package."
@@ -12688,12 +12736,13 @@
msgid ""
"See (re)packaging procedure using \"<literal>apt-get source</literal>\" in "
"<xref linkend=\"_porting_a_package_to_the_stable_system\"/>."
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><itemizedlist><listitem><para>
+### HW: see above regarding devscripts package.
msgid ""
"<literal>make-kpkg</literal> command requires the <literal>kernel-package</"
"literal> package (see <xref linkend=\"_the_kernel\"/>)."
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><itemizedlist><listitem><para>
@@ -12768,13 +12817,13 @@
"manvolnum></citerefentry> commands can be used to search any file which has "
"the general format of a Debian package control file."
msgstr ""
#. type: Content of: <book><chapter><section><section><para>
msgid ""
-"The \"<literal>dpkg -S <file_name_pattern></literal>\" can be used "
+"The \"<literal>dpkg -S <file_name_pattern></literal>\" can be used to "
"search package names which contain files with the matching name installed by "
"<literal>dpkg</literal>. But this overlooks files created by the maintainer "
"scripts."
msgstr ""
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