Hi Dmitry,
On 2014-09-14 21:50, Dmitry Smirnov wrote:
On Sun, 14 Sep 2014 17:51:33 Filipus Klutiero wrote:
The noun phrase "bonding driver" is missing a determiner such as "the" (this
could read "unlike the bonding driver").
Also, I would recommend adding a comma after that.
Thanks. Description updated yet again, I hope it is all good now:
http://anonscm.debian.org/cgit/collab-maint/libteam.git/diff/?id=99cd2aff05febfaa8e3e8434828865aa13851c60
Thank you. Here are some more issues I notice:
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"libteam" is a library for communication with kernel module (Netlink).|
The noun phrase "kernel module" is missing a determiner. Perhaps this should read
"with the Netlink kernel module".
Also, "libteam" should not be quoted.
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This is already implemented in the Linux kernel by the bonding driver but
unlike the bonding driver, libteam (user space) have the following
additional features|
"libteam" is third person singular, therefore "have" should read "has".
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Filipus Klutiero
http://www.philippecloutier.com
