On Mon, 15 Sep 2014 00:56:35 Filipus Klutiero wrote: > Thank you. Here are some more issues I notice: > > "libteam" is a library for communication with kernel module (Netlink).| > > The noun phrase "kernel module" is missing a determiner. Perhaps this should > read "with the Netlink kernel module". > > Also, "libteam" should not be quoted. > > > This is already implemented in the Linux kernel by the bonding driver but > > > > unlike the bonding driver, libteam (user space) have the following > > additional features| > > "libteam" is third person singular, therefore "have" should read "has".
Updated with our 5th correction of the long description: http://anonscm.debian.org/cgit/collab-maint/libteam.git/commit/?id=00659711ac9ef2e69d0825dfe947a2ea4c469eb6 Thanks again for all your suggestions. -- Regards, Dmitry Smirnov. --- All that is necessary for the triumph of evil is that good men do nothing.
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