Package: open-iscsi
Version: 2.0.730-1etch1

The package description is not explaining what this package is. Current
description (since etch until current sid version, 2.0.870~rc3-0.3) is:

Description: High performance, transport independent iSCSI implementation
 iSCSI is a network protocol standard that allows the use of the SCSI protocol
 over TCP/IP networks.  This implementation follows RFC3720.

while a package description should not explain what a protocol is. The
description should state what the package is. I suggest to change it in
something like those:

Description: Create iSCSI storage server
 This package contain software tools that will make this machine an iSCSI
 storage server. Using this package you may share your devices to other
 machines via iSCSI.

or (depending on what this package is)

Description: Access remote iSCSI storage
 This package contain software tools that will make possibile to access iSCSI
 storage in your network. Remote device can be discovered and used as locally
 connected SCSI disks.

or something different if this package make something different.

Bye,
Giuseppe




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