Please find, for review, the debconf templates and packages descriptions for 
the live-build source package.

This review will last from Saturday, October 01, 2011 to Tuesday, October 11, 
2011.

Please send reviews as unified diffs (diff -u) against the original
files. Comments about your proposed changes will be appreciated.

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When appropriate, I will send intermediate requests for review, with
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Comments" mail with "[LCFC]" as a subject tag.

Finally, a summary will be sent to the review bug report,
and a mail will be sent to this list with "[BTS]" as a subject tag.

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--- live-build.old/debian/live-build-cron.templates     2011-10-01 
07:35:47.423235601 +0200
+++ live-build/debian/live-build-cron.templates 2011-10-01 17:39:25.315655638 
+0200
@@ -1,3 +1,12 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# debian-l10n-engl...@lists.debian.org for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: live-build-cron/title
 Type: title
 _Description: Debian Live - System Build Scripts (cron autobuilder)
@@ -6,103 +15,100 @@
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
 _Description: Enable images autobuild?
- Do you want to enable autobuild for images?
- .
- If unsure, use 'no' (default).
+ Please choose whether you want to enable autobuild for images.
 
 Template: live-build-cron/images-directory
 Type: string
-_Default: /srv/debian.net/live-cdimage
-_Description: What directory to put builds to?
- Enter the directory where the images should be stored in.
+Default: /srv/debian.net/live-cdimage
+_Description: Directory for live images build:
+ Please enter the directory where the images should be stored in.
 
 Template: live-build-cron/images-cron
 Type: string
-_Default: 0 0 * * *
-_Description: What directory to put builds to?
- Enter the cron times where the images should be build.
+Default: 0 0 * * *
+_Description: Cron times entry for image builds:
+ Please enter cron times entry that will define times where the images
+ should be built.
 
 Template: live-build-cron/images-build
 Type: select
-_Choices: git, host, release
+Choices: git, host, release
 Default: host
-_Description: Which version of live-build to use?
- Select the version of live-build to use.
+_Description: Live-build version to use:
+ Please select the version of live-build to use.
  .
- If you choose git, the current version of live-build from git will be
- used. host will use the live-build from the host system, and release will
- use the last released version.
+ If you choose "git", the current version of live-build from git will be
+ used. If you choose "host", live-build wille be used from the host
+ system. Finally, "release" will use the last released version.
 
 Template: live-build-cron/images-daily-distributions
 Type: multiselect
-_Choices: squeeze, wheezy, sid
+Choices: squeeze, wheezy, sid
 Default: sid
-_Description: What distributions to build for daily images?
- Select the distributions you would like to build for daily-images.
+_Description: Distribution(s) for built daily images:
+ Please select the distributions you would like to include on daily images.
 
 Template: live-build-cron/images-daily-flavours
 Type: multiselect
-_Choices: standard, rescue, gnome-desktop, kde-desktop, lxde-desktop, 
xfce-desktop
+Choices: standard, rescue, gnome-desktop, kde-desktop, lxde-desktop, 
xfce-desktop
 Default: standard
-_Description: What flavours to build for daily images?
- Select the flavours you would like to build for daily-images.
+_Description: Daily images flavours:
+ Please select the flavours you would like to include on daily images.
 
 Template: live-build-cron/images-weekly-distributions
 Type: multiselect
-_Choices: squeeze, wheezy, sid
+Choices: squeeze, wheezy, sid
 Default: wheezy
-_Description: What distributions to build for weekly images?
- Select the distributions you would like to build for weekly-images.
+_Description: Distribution for weekly images:
+ Please select the distributions you would like to include on weekly images.
 
 Template: live-build-cron/images-weekly-flavours
 Type: multiselect
-_Choices: standard, rescue, gnome-desktop, kde-desktop, lxde-desktop, 
xfce-desktop
+Choices: standard, rescue, gnome-desktop, kde-desktop, lxde-desktop, 
xfce-desktop
 Default: standard
-_Description: What flavours to build for weekly images?
- Select the flavours you would like to build for weekly-images.
+_Description: Weekly images flavours:
+ Please select the flavours you would like to include on weekly images.
 
 Template: live-build-cron/images-monthly-distributions
 Type: multiselect
 _Choices: squeeze, wheezy, sid
 Default: squeeze
-_Description: What distributions to build for monthly images?
- Select the distributions you would like to build for monthly-images.
+_Description: Distribution for monthly images:
+ Please select the distributions you would like to include on monthly images.
 
 Template: live-build-cron/images-monthly-flavours
 Type: multiselect
 _Choices: standard, rescue, gnome-desktop, kde-desktop, lxde-desktop, 
xfce-desktop
 Default: standard
-_Description: What flavours to build for monthly images?
- Select the flavours you would like to build for monthly-images.
+_Description: Monthly images flavours:
+ Please select the flavours you would like to include on monthly images.
 
 Template: live-build-cron/images-source
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
 _Description: Enable source for live-build-cron-images?
- Do you sources for live-build-cron-images?
 
 Template: live-build-cron/manual-enable
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
 _Description: Enable live-build-cron-manual?
- Do you want to enable live-build-cron-manual?
- .
- If unsure, use 'no' (default).
+ Please choose whether you want to enable scheduled manual builds.
 
 Template: live-build-cron/manual-directory
 Type: string
 _Default: /srv/debian.net/live-manual
-_Description: What directory to put builds to?
- Enter the directory where the manual should be stored in.
+_Description: Directory for live images manual build:
+ Please enter the directory where the manual builds should be stored in.
 
 Template: live-build-cron/manual-cron
 Type: string
-_Default: 0-59/10 * * * *
-_Description: What interval to use for the cron job?
- Enter the cron times where the manual should be build.
+Default: 0-59/10 * * * *
+_Description: Cron times entry for manual builds:
+ Please enter cron times entry that will define times where the manual
+ should be built.
 
 Template: live-build-cron/manual-username
 Type: string
 _Default: live-build-cron-manual
-_Description: What useraccount to use to build the manual?
- Enter the name of the username.
+_Description: User account to use for manual builds.
+ Please enter the username that should be sued for manual builds.
--- live-build.old/debian/control       2011-10-01 07:35:47.423235601 +0200
+++ live-build/debian/control   2011-10-01 17:41:31.322970299 +0200
@@ -20,25 +20,21 @@
  dosfstools, genisoimage, memtest86+ | memtest86, mtools, parted,
  squashfs-tools | mtd-tools, sudo | fakeroot, syslinux | grub,
  uuid-runtime, win32-loader
-Description: Debian Live - System Build Scripts
- live-build contains the scripts that build a Debian Live system image from a
+Description: Debian Live - system build scripts
+ This package provides the scripts that build a Debian Live system image from a
  configuration directory.
 
 Package: live-build-cgi
 Architecture: all
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}
 Recommends: apache2 | httpd
-Description: Debian Live - System Build Scripts (cgi frontend)
- live-build contains the scripts that build a Debian Live system image from a
- configuration directory.
- .
- This package contains the cgi frontend.
+Description: Debian Live - system build scripts - CGI frontend
+ This package provides the CGI frontend for scripts that build a
+ Debian Live system image from a configuration directory.
 
 Package: live-build-cron
 Architecture: all
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}, live-build (= ${source:Version}), cron
-Description: Debian Live - System Build Scripts (cron autobuilder)
- live-build contains the scripts that build a Debian Live system image from a
- configuration directory.
- .
- This package contains the cron autobuilder.
+Description: Debian Live - system build scripts - cron autobuilder
+ This package provides the cron autobuilder that builds a
+ Debian Live system image from a configuration directory.

-- 


# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
# team
#
# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
# debian-l10n-engl...@lists.debian.org for advice.
#
# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.

Template: live-build-cron/title
Type: title
_Description: Debian Live - System Build Scripts (cron autobuilder)

Template: live-build-cron/images-enable
Type: boolean
Default: false
_Description: Enable images autobuild?
 Please choose whether you want to enable autobuild for images.

Template: live-build-cron/images-directory
Type: string
Default: /srv/debian.net/live-cdimage
_Description: Directory for live images build:
 Please enter the directory where the images should be stored in.

Template: live-build-cron/images-cron
Type: string
Default: 0 0 * * *
_Description: Cron times entry for image builds:
 Please enter cron times entry that will define times where the images
 should be built.

Template: live-build-cron/images-build
Type: select
Choices: git, host, release
Default: host
_Description: Live-build version to use:
 Please select the version of live-build to use.
 .
 If you choose "git", the current version of live-build from git will be
 used. If you choose "host", live-build wille be used from the host
 system. Finally, "release" will use the last released version.

Template: live-build-cron/images-daily-distributions
Type: multiselect
Choices: squeeze, wheezy, sid
Default: sid
_Description: Distribution(s) for built daily images:
 Please select the distributions you would like to include on daily images.

Template: live-build-cron/images-daily-flavours
Type: multiselect
Choices: standard, rescue, gnome-desktop, kde-desktop, lxde-desktop, 
xfce-desktop
Default: standard
_Description: Daily images flavours:
 Please select the flavours you would like to include on daily images.

Template: live-build-cron/images-weekly-distributions
Type: multiselect
Choices: squeeze, wheezy, sid
Default: wheezy
_Description: Distribution for weekly images:
 Please select the distributions you would like to include on weekly images.

Template: live-build-cron/images-weekly-flavours
Type: multiselect
Choices: standard, rescue, gnome-desktop, kde-desktop, lxde-desktop, 
xfce-desktop
Default: standard
_Description: Weekly images flavours:
 Please select the flavours you would like to include on weekly images.

Template: live-build-cron/images-monthly-distributions
Type: multiselect
_Choices: squeeze, wheezy, sid
Default: squeeze
_Description: Distribution for monthly images:
 Please select the distributions you would like to include on monthly images.

Template: live-build-cron/images-monthly-flavours
Type: multiselect
_Choices: standard, rescue, gnome-desktop, kde-desktop, lxde-desktop, 
xfce-desktop
Default: standard
_Description: Monthly images flavours:
 Please select the flavours you would like to include on monthly images.

Template: live-build-cron/images-source
Type: boolean
Default: false
_Description: Enable source for live-build-cron-images?

Template: live-build-cron/manual-enable
Type: boolean
Default: false
_Description: Enable live-build-cron-manual?
 Please choose whether you want to enable scheduled manual builds.

Template: live-build-cron/manual-directory
Type: string
_Default: /srv/debian.net/live-manual
_Description: Directory for live images manual build:
 Please enter the directory where the manual builds should be stored in.

Template: live-build-cron/manual-cron
Type: string
Default: 0-59/10 * * * *
_Description: Cron times entry for manual builds:
 Please enter cron times entry that will define times where the manual
 should be built.

Template: live-build-cron/manual-username
Type: string
_Default: live-build-cron-manual
_Description: User account to use for manual builds.
 Please enter the username that should be sued for manual builds.
--- live-build.old/debian/live-build-cron.templates     2011-10-01 
07:35:47.423235601 +0200
+++ live-build/debian/live-build-cron.templates 2011-10-01 17:39:25.315655638 
+0200
@@ -1,3 +1,12 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# debian-l10n-engl...@lists.debian.org for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: live-build-cron/title
 Type: title
 _Description: Debian Live - System Build Scripts (cron autobuilder)
@@ -6,103 +15,100 @@
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
 _Description: Enable images autobuild?
- Do you want to enable autobuild for images?
- .
- If unsure, use 'no' (default).
+ Please choose whether you want to enable autobuild for images.
 
 Template: live-build-cron/images-directory
 Type: string
-_Default: /srv/debian.net/live-cdimage
-_Description: What directory to put builds to?
- Enter the directory where the images should be stored in.
+Default: /srv/debian.net/live-cdimage
+_Description: Directory for live images build:
+ Please enter the directory where the images should be stored in.
 
 Template: live-build-cron/images-cron
 Type: string
-_Default: 0 0 * * *
-_Description: What directory to put builds to?
- Enter the cron times where the images should be build.
+Default: 0 0 * * *
+_Description: Cron times entry for image builds:
+ Please enter cron times entry that will define times where the images
+ should be built.
 
 Template: live-build-cron/images-build
 Type: select
-_Choices: git, host, release
+Choices: git, host, release
 Default: host
-_Description: Which version of live-build to use?
- Select the version of live-build to use.
+_Description: Live-build version to use:
+ Please select the version of live-build to use.
  .
- If you choose git, the current version of live-build from git will be
- used. host will use the live-build from the host system, and release will
- use the last released version.
+ If you choose "git", the current version of live-build from git will be
+ used. If you choose "host", live-build wille be used from the host
+ system. Finally, "release" will use the last released version.
 
 Template: live-build-cron/images-daily-distributions
 Type: multiselect
-_Choices: squeeze, wheezy, sid
+Choices: squeeze, wheezy, sid
 Default: sid
-_Description: What distributions to build for daily images?
- Select the distributions you would like to build for daily-images.
+_Description: Distribution(s) for built daily images:
+ Please select the distributions you would like to include on daily images.
 
 Template: live-build-cron/images-daily-flavours
 Type: multiselect
-_Choices: standard, rescue, gnome-desktop, kde-desktop, lxde-desktop, 
xfce-desktop
+Choices: standard, rescue, gnome-desktop, kde-desktop, lxde-desktop, 
xfce-desktop
 Default: standard
-_Description: What flavours to build for daily images?
- Select the flavours you would like to build for daily-images.
+_Description: Daily images flavours:
+ Please select the flavours you would like to include on daily images.
 
 Template: live-build-cron/images-weekly-distributions
 Type: multiselect
-_Choices: squeeze, wheezy, sid
+Choices: squeeze, wheezy, sid
 Default: wheezy
-_Description: What distributions to build for weekly images?
- Select the distributions you would like to build for weekly-images.
+_Description: Distribution for weekly images:
+ Please select the distributions you would like to include on weekly images.
 
 Template: live-build-cron/images-weekly-flavours
 Type: multiselect
-_Choices: standard, rescue, gnome-desktop, kde-desktop, lxde-desktop, 
xfce-desktop
+Choices: standard, rescue, gnome-desktop, kde-desktop, lxde-desktop, 
xfce-desktop
 Default: standard
-_Description: What flavours to build for weekly images?
- Select the flavours you would like to build for weekly-images.
+_Description: Weekly images flavours:
+ Please select the flavours you would like to include on weekly images.
 
 Template: live-build-cron/images-monthly-distributions
 Type: multiselect
 _Choices: squeeze, wheezy, sid
 Default: squeeze
-_Description: What distributions to build for monthly images?
- Select the distributions you would like to build for monthly-images.
+_Description: Distribution for monthly images:
+ Please select the distributions you would like to include on monthly images.
 
 Template: live-build-cron/images-monthly-flavours
 Type: multiselect
 _Choices: standard, rescue, gnome-desktop, kde-desktop, lxde-desktop, 
xfce-desktop
 Default: standard
-_Description: What flavours to build for monthly images?
- Select the flavours you would like to build for monthly-images.
+_Description: Monthly images flavours:
+ Please select the flavours you would like to include on monthly images.
 
 Template: live-build-cron/images-source
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
 _Description: Enable source for live-build-cron-images?
- Do you sources for live-build-cron-images?
 
 Template: live-build-cron/manual-enable
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
 _Description: Enable live-build-cron-manual?
- Do you want to enable live-build-cron-manual?
- .
- If unsure, use 'no' (default).
+ Please choose whether you want to enable scheduled manual builds.
 
 Template: live-build-cron/manual-directory
 Type: string
 _Default: /srv/debian.net/live-manual
-_Description: What directory to put builds to?
- Enter the directory where the manual should be stored in.
+_Description: Directory for live images manual build:
+ Please enter the directory where the manual builds should be stored in.
 
 Template: live-build-cron/manual-cron
 Type: string
-_Default: 0-59/10 * * * *
-_Description: What interval to use for the cron job?
- Enter the cron times where the manual should be build.
+Default: 0-59/10 * * * *
+_Description: Cron times entry for manual builds:
+ Please enter cron times entry that will define times where the manual
+ should be built.
 
 Template: live-build-cron/manual-username
 Type: string
 _Default: live-build-cron-manual
-_Description: What useraccount to use to build the manual?
- Enter the name of the username.
+_Description: User account to use for manual builds.
+ Please enter the username that should be sued for manual builds.
--- live-build.old/debian/control       2011-10-01 07:35:47.423235601 +0200
+++ live-build/debian/control   2011-10-01 17:41:31.322970299 +0200
@@ -20,25 +20,21 @@
  dosfstools, genisoimage, memtest86+ | memtest86, mtools, parted,
  squashfs-tools | mtd-tools, sudo | fakeroot, syslinux | grub,
  uuid-runtime, win32-loader
-Description: Debian Live - System Build Scripts
- live-build contains the scripts that build a Debian Live system image from a
+Description: Debian Live - system build scripts
+ This package provides the scripts that build a Debian Live system image from a
  configuration directory.
 
 Package: live-build-cgi
 Architecture: all
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}
 Recommends: apache2 | httpd
-Description: Debian Live - System Build Scripts (cgi frontend)
- live-build contains the scripts that build a Debian Live system image from a
- configuration directory.
- .
- This package contains the cgi frontend.
+Description: Debian Live - system build scripts - CGI frontend
+ This package provides the CGI frontend for scripts that build a
+ Debian Live system image from a configuration directory.
 
 Package: live-build-cron
 Architecture: all
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}, live-build (= ${source:Version}), cron
-Description: Debian Live - System Build Scripts (cron autobuilder)
- live-build contains the scripts that build a Debian Live system image from a
- configuration directory.
- .
- This package contains the cron autobuilder.
+Description: Debian Live - system build scripts - cron autobuilder
+ This package provides the cron autobuilder that builds a
+ Debian Live system image from a configuration directory.
Source: live-build
Section: misc
Priority: optional
Maintainer: Debian Live Project <debian-l...@lists.debian.org>
Uploaders: Daniel Baumann <dan...@debian.org>
Build-Depends: debhelper (>= 8)
Build-Depends-Indep: gettext
Standards-Version: 3.9.2
Homepage: http://live.debian.net/devel/live-build/
Vcs-Browser: http://live.debian.net/gitweb/?p=live-build.git
Vcs-Git: git://live.debian.net/git/live-build.git

Package: live-build
Architecture: all
Depends: ${misc:Depends}, debootstrap | cdebootstrap | cdebootstrap-static
Recommends:
 live-boot-doc, live-config-doc, live-manual-html | live-manual, cpio,
 gettext-base, gnu-fdisk
Suggests:
 dosfstools, genisoimage, memtest86+ | memtest86, mtools, parted,
 squashfs-tools | mtd-tools, sudo | fakeroot, syslinux | grub,
 uuid-runtime, win32-loader
Description: Debian Live - system build scripts
 This package provides the scripts that build a Debian Live system image from a
 configuration directory.

Package: live-build-cgi
Architecture: all
Depends: ${misc:Depends}
Recommends: apache2 | httpd
Description: Debian Live - system build scripts - CGI frontend
 This package provides the CGI frontend for scripts that build a
 Debian Live system image from a configuration directory.

Package: live-build-cron
Architecture: all
Depends: ${misc:Depends}, live-build (= ${source:Version}), cron
Description: Debian Live - system build scripts - cron autobuilder
 This package provides the cron autobuilder that builds a
 Debian Live system image from a configuration directory.

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