Christian PERRIER wrote: > _Description: Enable images autobuild? I think you mean: _Description: Enable image autobuilds?
[...] > + Please choose whether you want to enable autobuild for images. Getting rid of second person and giving readers an alternative phrasing in case they didn't understand the first: Please choose whether live-images should be built automatically. > Template: live-build-cron/images-directory [...] > +Default: /srv/debian.net/live-cdimage > +_Description: Directory for live images build: That could be just _Description: Image build directory: > + Please enter the directory where the images should be stored in. ^^ It doesn't need both "where" and "in", and to keep the people who worry about sentence-final prepostions quiet: Please specify the directory where live-images should be stored. Also avoiding "enter the directory", and expanding "image" to "live-image" wherever possible in long descriptions. > Template: live-build-cron/images-cron [...] > +Default: 0 0 * * * > +_Description: Cron times entry for image builds: > + Please enter cron times entry that will define times where the images > + should be built. Well, for a start it's a cron "expression", and if I'm defining all six fields I can control dates as well as times. And "where" is the directory again. Maybe: _Description: Cron expression for image builds: Please specify the scheduling for the cronjob defining when live-images should be built. > Template: live-build-cron/images-build [...] > +_Description: Live-build version to use: > + Please select the version of live-build to use. > . > + If you choose "git", the current version of live-build from git will be > + used. If you choose "host", live-build wille be used from the host > + system. Finally, "release" will use the last released version. Nice except for used. If you choose "host", the live-build from the host system will be used. (There was a typo anyway: s/wille/will/) > Template: live-build-cron/images-daily-distributions [...] > +_Description: Distribution(s) for built daily images: > + Please select the distributions you would like to include on daily images. _Description: Daily image distribution(s): Please select the distributions you would like to include for live-images built daily. > Template: live-build-cron/images-daily-flavours [...] > +_Description: Daily images flavours: > + Please select the flavours you would like to include on daily images. en_USify (throughout): _Description: Daily image flavor(s): Please select the flavors you would like to include for live-images built daily. (But watch out for the template names.) [...] > Template: live-build-cron/manual-enable [...] > _Description: Enable live-build-cron-manual? > + Please choose whether you want to enable scheduled manual builds. Automatic manual builds? Oh, wait, maybe you mean manual in the nroff sense? No, it's interpretation #3: http://live.debian.net/manual. So long descriptions should always talk about "builds of the manual", or whatever, not "manual builds". Anyway, shouldn't this just be parallel to images-enable? Please choose whether the manual should be built automatically. > Template: live-build-cron/manual-cron [...] > +_Description: Cron times entry for manual builds: > + Please enter cron times entry that will define times where the manual > + should be built. _Description: Cron expression for manual builds: Please specify the scheduling for the cronjob defining when the manual should be built. > Template: live-build-cron/manual-username > +_Description: User account to use for manual builds. > + Please enter the username that should be sued for manual builds. _Description: User account for manual builds: Please enter the username that should be used for builds of the manual. In the control file: > +Description: Debian Live - system build scripts > +Description: Debian Live - system build scripts - CGI frontend > +Description: Debian Live - system build scripts - cron autobuilder My only suggestion is that it could drop the first dash. -- JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
diff -ru live-build.orig/debian/control live-build/debian/control --- live-build.orig/debian/control 2011-09-30 13:54:48.000000000 +0100 +++ live-build/debian/control 2011-10-01 18:17:52.477960866 +0100 @@ -20,25 +20,21 @@ dosfstools, genisoimage, memtest86+ | memtest86, mtools, parted, squashfs-tools | mtd-tools, sudo | fakeroot, syslinux | grub, uuid-runtime, win32-loader -Description: Debian Live - System Build Scripts - live-build contains the scripts that build a Debian Live system image from a +Description: Debian Live system build scripts + This package provides the scripts that build a Debian Live system image from a configuration directory. Package: live-build-cgi Architecture: all Depends: ${misc:Depends} Recommends: apache2 | httpd -Description: Debian Live - System Build Scripts (cgi frontend) - live-build contains the scripts that build a Debian Live system image from a - configuration directory. - . - This package contains the cgi frontend. +Description: Debian Live system build scripts - CGI frontend + This package provides the CGI frontend for scripts that build a + Debian Live system image from a configuration directory. Package: live-build-cron Architecture: all Depends: ${misc:Depends}, live-build (= ${source:Version}), cron -Description: Debian Live - System Build Scripts (cron autobuilder) - live-build contains the scripts that build a Debian Live system image from a - configuration directory. - . - This package contains the cron autobuilder. +Description: Debian Live system build scripts - cron autobuilder + This package provides the cron autobuilder that builds a + Debian Live system image from a configuration directory. diff -ru live-build.orig/debian/live-build-cron.templates live-build/debian/live-build-cron.templates --- live-build.orig/debian/live-build-cron.templates 2011-09-30 13:54:48.000000000 +0100 +++ live-build/debian/live-build-cron.templates 2011-10-01 18:14:24.606290974 +0100 @@ -1,3 +1,12 @@ +# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english +# team +# +# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask +# debian-l10n-engl...@lists.debian.org for advice. +# +# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such +# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers. + Template: live-build-cron/title Type: title _Description: Debian Live - System Build Scripts (cron autobuilder) @@ -5,104 +14,107 @@ Template: live-build-cron/images-enable Type: boolean Default: false -_Description: Enable images autobuild? - Do you want to enable autobuild for images? - . - If unsure, use 'no' (default). +_Description: Enable image autobuilds? + Please choose whether live-images should be built automatically. Template: live-build-cron/images-directory Type: string -_Default: /srv/debian.net/live-cdimage -_Description: What directory to put builds to? - Enter the directory where the images should be stored in. +Default: /srv/debian.net/live-cdimage +_Description: Image build directory: + Please specify the directory where live-images should be stored. Template: live-build-cron/images-cron Type: string -_Default: 0 0 * * * -_Description: What directory to put builds to? - Enter the cron times where the images should be build. +Default: 0 0 * * * +_Description: Cron expression for image builds: + Please specify the scheduling for the cronjob defining when live-images + should be built. Template: live-build-cron/images-build Type: select -_Choices: git, host, release +Choices: git, host, release Default: host -_Description: Which version of live-build to use? - Select the version of live-build to use. +_Description: Live-build version to use: + Please select the version of live-build to use. . - If you choose git, the current version of live-build from git will be - used. host will use the live-build from the host system, and release will - use the last released version. + If you choose "git", the current version of live-build from git will be + used. If you choose "host", the live-build from the host system will be + used. Finally, "release" will use the last released version. Template: live-build-cron/images-daily-distributions Type: multiselect -_Choices: squeeze, wheezy, sid +Choices: squeeze, wheezy, sid Default: sid -_Description: What distributions to build for daily images? - Select the distributions you would like to build for daily-images. +_Description: Daily image distribution(s): + Please select the distributions you would like to include for live-images + built daily. Template: live-build-cron/images-daily-flavours Type: multiselect -_Choices: standard, rescue, gnome-desktop, kde-desktop, lxde-desktop, xfce-desktop +Choices: standard, rescue, gnome-desktop, kde-desktop, lxde-desktop, xfce-desktop Default: standard -_Description: What flavours to build for daily images? - Select the flavours you would like to build for daily-images. +_Description: Daily image flavor(s): + Please select the flavors you would like to include for for live-images + built daily. Template: live-build-cron/images-weekly-distributions Type: multiselect -_Choices: squeeze, wheezy, sid +Choices: squeeze, wheezy, sid Default: wheezy -_Description: What distributions to build for weekly images? - Select the distributions you would like to build for weekly-images. +_Description: Weekly image distribution(s): + Please select the distributions you would like to include for live-images + built weekly. Template: live-build-cron/images-weekly-flavours Type: multiselect -_Choices: standard, rescue, gnome-desktop, kde-desktop, lxde-desktop, xfce-desktop +Choices: standard, rescue, gnome-desktop, kde-desktop, lxde-desktop, xfce-desktop Default: standard -_Description: What flavours to build for weekly images? - Select the flavours you would like to build for weekly-images. +_Description: Weekly image flavor(s): + Please select the flavors you would like to include for live-images + built weekly. Template: live-build-cron/images-monthly-distributions Type: multiselect _Choices: squeeze, wheezy, sid Default: squeeze -_Description: What distributions to build for monthly images? - Select the distributions you would like to build for monthly-images. +_Description: Monthly image distribution(s): + Please select the distributions you would like to include for live-images + built monthly. Template: live-build-cron/images-monthly-flavours Type: multiselect _Choices: standard, rescue, gnome-desktop, kde-desktop, lxde-desktop, xfce-desktop Default: standard -_Description: What flavours to build for monthly images? - Select the flavours you would like to build for monthly-images. +_Description: Monthly image flavor(s): + Please select the flavors you would like to include for live-images + built monthly. Template: live-build-cron/images-source Type: boolean Default: false _Description: Enable source for live-build-cron-images? - Do you sources for live-build-cron-images? Template: live-build-cron/manual-enable Type: boolean Default: false _Description: Enable live-build-cron-manual? - Do you want to enable live-build-cron-manual? - . - If unsure, use 'no' (default). + Please choose whether the manual should be built automatically. Template: live-build-cron/manual-directory Type: string _Default: /srv/debian.net/live-manual -_Description: What directory to put builds to? - Enter the directory where the manual should be stored in. +_Description: Manual build directory: + Please specify the directory where the manual should be stored. Template: live-build-cron/manual-cron Type: string -_Default: 0-59/10 * * * * -_Description: What interval to use for the cron job? - Enter the cron times where the manual should be build. +Default: 0-59/10 * * * * + _Description: Cron expression for manual builds: + Please specify the scheduling for the cronjob defining when the manual + should be built. Template: live-build-cron/manual-username Type: string _Default: live-build-cron-manual -_Description: What useraccount to use to build the manual? - Enter the name of the username. +_Description: User account for manual builds: + Please enter the username that should be used for builds of the manual.
# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english # team # # If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask # debian-l10n-engl...@lists.debian.org for advice. # # Even minor modifications require translation updates and such # changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers. Template: live-build-cron/title Type: title _Description: Debian Live - System Build Scripts (cron autobuilder) Template: live-build-cron/images-enable Type: boolean Default: false _Description: Enable image autobuilds? Please choose whether live-images should be built automatically. Template: live-build-cron/images-directory Type: string Default: /srv/debian.net/live-cdimage _Description: Image build directory: Please specify the directory where live-images should be stored. Template: live-build-cron/images-cron Type: string Default: 0 0 * * * _Description: Cron expression for image builds: Please specify the scheduling for the cronjob defining when live-images should be built. Template: live-build-cron/images-build Type: select Choices: git, host, release Default: host _Description: Live-build version to use: Please select the version of live-build to use. . If you choose "git", the current version of live-build from git will be used. If you choose "host", the live-build from the host system will be used. Finally, "release" will use the last released version. Template: live-build-cron/images-daily-distributions Type: multiselect Choices: squeeze, wheezy, sid Default: sid _Description: Daily image distribution(s): Please select the distributions you would like to include for live-images built daily. Template: live-build-cron/images-daily-flavours Type: multiselect Choices: standard, rescue, gnome-desktop, kde-desktop, lxde-desktop, xfce-desktop Default: standard _Description: Daily image flavor(s): Please select the flavors you would like to include for for live-images built daily. Template: live-build-cron/images-weekly-distributions Type: multiselect Choices: squeeze, wheezy, sid Default: wheezy _Description: Weekly image distribution(s): Please select the distributions you would like to include for live-images built weekly. Template: live-build-cron/images-weekly-flavours Type: multiselect Choices: standard, rescue, gnome-desktop, kde-desktop, lxde-desktop, xfce-desktop Default: standard _Description: Weekly image flavor(s): Please select the flavors you would like to include for live-images built weekly. Template: live-build-cron/images-monthly-distributions Type: multiselect _Choices: squeeze, wheezy, sid Default: squeeze _Description: Monthly image distribution(s): Please select the distributions you would like to include for live-images built monthly. Template: live-build-cron/images-monthly-flavours Type: multiselect _Choices: standard, rescue, gnome-desktop, kde-desktop, lxde-desktop, xfce-desktop Default: standard _Description: Monthly image flavor(s): Please select the flavors you would like to include for live-images built monthly. Template: live-build-cron/images-source Type: boolean Default: false _Description: Enable source for live-build-cron-images? Template: live-build-cron/manual-enable Type: boolean Default: false _Description: Enable live-build-cron-manual? Please choose whether the manual should be built automatically. Template: live-build-cron/manual-directory Type: string _Default: /srv/debian.net/live-manual _Description: Manual build directory: Please specify the directory where the manual should be stored. Template: live-build-cron/manual-cron Type: string Default: 0-59/10 * * * * _Description: Cron expression for manual builds: Please specify the scheduling for the cronjob defining when the manual should be built. Template: live-build-cron/manual-username Type: string _Default: live-build-cron-manual _Description: User account for manual builds: Please enter the username that should be used for builds of the manual.
Source: live-build Section: misc Priority: optional Maintainer: Debian Live Project <debian-l...@lists.debian.org> Uploaders: Daniel Baumann <dan...@debian.org> Build-Depends: debhelper (>= 8) Build-Depends-Indep: gettext Standards-Version: 3.9.2 Homepage: http://live.debian.net/devel/live-build/ Vcs-Browser: http://live.debian.net/gitweb/?p=live-build.git Vcs-Git: git://live.debian.net/git/live-build.git Package: live-build Architecture: all Depends: ${misc:Depends}, debootstrap | cdebootstrap | cdebootstrap-static Recommends: live-boot-doc, live-config-doc, live-manual-html | live-manual, cpio, gettext-base, gnu-fdisk Suggests: dosfstools, genisoimage, memtest86+ | memtest86, mtools, parted, squashfs-tools | mtd-tools, sudo | fakeroot, syslinux | grub, uuid-runtime, win32-loader Description: Debian Live system build scripts This package provides the scripts that build a Debian Live system image from a configuration directory. Package: live-build-cgi Architecture: all Depends: ${misc:Depends} Recommends: apache2 | httpd Description: Debian Live system build scripts - CGI frontend This package provides the CGI frontend for scripts that build a Debian Live system image from a configuration directory. Package: live-build-cron Architecture: all Depends: ${misc:Depends}, live-build (= ${source:Version}), cron Description: Debian Live system build scripts - cron autobuilder This package provides the cron autobuilder that builds a Debian Live system image from a configuration directory.