On 29 February 2012 14:29, David Prévot <[email protected]> wrote: > Not really: tho PO files are always generated from the source files > (index.html.en here). >
sorry! > > Please note that, even if I can't judge of the quality of your > proposals, I would prefer *not* to commit them as is. I have no problem with anything. Just that, as I was asked if I could get a ja translation, I thought I should look at the en. > > A few remarks after a quick glance: > >> - <h2 class="menu">Local services</h2> >> + <h2 class="menu">Local Services</h2> > > I'm not fond of uppercase everywhere, is there a rationale for that change? To match the Debian Edu in the next section, and because it is a title. > >> - Debian Edu server was successful. Congratulations, and welcome. To >> change >> + Debian Edu server was successful. Congratulations, and welcome! To >> change > > I'm not fond of exclamation marks either, is there a rationale for that > change? I thought it sounded like one. I am happy to drop it. > > > Your patch needs proofread (“adminstration”), and I'm not fond of the > personal point of view (“your network”, while it should actually be the > school's network). Sorry I presumed there was spellcheck in an editor I have never used before. Because the original was scattered with familiar "you"s, I thought I should keep that tone. It doesn't have to be a school, so it could simply be "the network" > > and it would be a shame to break any of the ten translations that are > complete right now. So, I propose to ask for a quick review on the I understand this, and thought that the meaning of every section remains the same, and therefore translations wouldn't be affected. I haven't tried to rewrite the page, just improve the wording. My friend was having trouble translating some of it, that's what made me look at it. I am fine if you say it is too late. I will look at it again for wheezy. cheers nigel -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to [email protected] with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact [email protected] Archive: http://lists.debian.org/cadlsrd6aew6g5tmbfrs62hlqtvkhuyp2wq0ccwsqyy10sp9...@mail.gmail.com
