* MJ Ray ([EMAIL PROTECTED]) [080310 12:46]:
> Andreas Barth <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> > So, I would replace your 2. with the current text, and your 3. with:
> >   3. During any DPL term, the DPL might appoint up to two new members
> >      unilaterally. He might replace an existing member, or add them as
> >      additional members at his choice, provided the maximum number of eight
> >      members is not exceeded.
> 
> I don't think that makes sense.  s/might/may/ or s/might/can/ please.

may is probably better - that was german english, sorry.

> I'd also s/eight// because there seems no need to repeat the maximum
> size and it could make future amendments smaller.

Agreed.



Cheers,
Andi
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