On Sun, Oct 24, 2004 at 04:41:45PM -0700, Eric Gaumer wrote:
> Package: wnpp
> Severity: wishlist
> 
> 
> * Package name    : tomboy
>   Version         : 0.2.2
>   Upstream Author : beatniksoftware <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
> * URL             : http://www.beatniksoftware.com/tomboy/
> * License         : LGPL
>   Description     : Tomboy is a desktop note-taking application for Linux and 
> Unix. 

Short description should not repeat the package name, certainly not as the
first word, and I don't think that "for Linux and Unix" is necessary,
considering this is the Debian package.  Remember also to try and keep the
short description below about 60 characters, because anything beyond that
often gets chopped by frontends.

>   Simple and easy to use, but with potential to help you organize the
>   ideas and information you deal with every day.

That's not a bad description, but I (as a potential user) would like to know
what this thing is going to do for me beyond what (say) knotes does
(post-its for your desktop, in case you were wondering).

- Matt

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