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Kim Haase commented on DERBY-2390:
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Thanks very much for doing this work, Laura! I think you've inserted the WWD 
material in the right place. I'm not sure that "self-study guide" is the right 
term, though, since it implies you're just reading -- it's really a tutorial. 
Also, "up and running" might be a little colloquial. So I would suggest a title 
like "Tutorial: working with Derby" or maybe even just "Derby tutorial". 

I see that the "SQL Syntax" section is still included; were you going to file a 
separate issue to move it to the Reference Manual (maybe a subtask of this one)?

> DOCS - Merge Working with Derby and Getting Started Guide
> ---------------------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: DERBY-2390
>                 URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-2390
>             Project: Derby
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>          Components: Documentation
>            Reporter: Laura Stewart
>         Assigned To: Laura Stewart
>
> The activities in the Working with Derby guide should be merged into the 
> Getting Started Guide.
> Review Getting Started Guide for any reference info that should be either 
> "shared" with another guide
> or moved to another guide. For example, the SQL Syntax section in the Getting 
> Started Guide should 
> be moved to the Reference Manual.

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