On Sat, Dec 24, 2016 at 1:31 AM, Stephen Michel
<stephen.mic...@tufts.edu> wrote:
> Our innovative crowd*matching* system empowers you to join with
> others in supporting the public goods *you* care about, creating
> significant impact at little individual cost.
* Shorter, and doesn't lose anything important that I can tell.
I was tired when I wrote this last night and forgot to mention that I
also think this bit could be reworded to be shorter still. I wasn't
trying to wordsmith anything as Aaron is better at that than I; the
important part is the change to the structure.
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