> On 2 Feb 2016, at 20:05, Alexandre Lissy <[email protected]> wrote: > > Le 01/02/2016 13:48, Chris Mills a écrit : >> Hi folks, >> >> I’ve given the following articles an edit: >> >> https://developer.mozilla.org/en-US/docs/Mozilla/Firefox_OS/Building_and_installing_Firefox_OS/B2G_installer_add-on > > Thanks for the review! I have added much more informations, so it is > likely you are going to need to have another look :)
not a problem — I’ve edited your updates. The only but I’m not sure about is this: https://developer.mozilla.org/en-US/docs/Mozilla/Firefox_OS/Building_and_installing_Firefox_OS/B2G_installer_add-on#Adding_new_device_support Check this carefully. For example, I was a bit confused by "If your device does have support…” . Surely if it already has support then you don’t need to add it? So I changed it to "If your device does not have support for this”. Is this correct? I think it could do with a bit more clarity. > > I am just a bit doubtful of the value of mentionning MozITP on this > page, given the goal of the addon. Setting up MozITP is much more > complex than firing a firefox with a new profile :) Ok, makes sense - I’ve removed it ;-) _______________________________________________ dev-fxos mailing list [email protected] https://lists.mozilla.org/listinfo/dev-fxos
