Quick look: On Aug 21, 2007, at 9:08 AM, Matt Hogstrom wrote:
.... OpenJPA projects. Here is a list of some of these programming enhancements:
"Here is a list..." sounds clunky... we will reword that.
... continued promotion of the ”Little G” 2.0.1 —a lightweight
Also sounds clunky: "of _the_ Little G"... I recommend "of Little G" instead (drop the 'the'). Also, is "promotion" the right word? How about "development" or "usage"...
