Hi Edward, I think it generally looks better than the current one, I would just change this:
Many data analysis techniques such as machine learning and graph algorithms require iterative computations but MapReduce model doesn't fit for these iterative data analysis applications. To run these iterative data analysis applications more efficiently, Hama offers pure Bulk Synchronous Parallel computing engine. to something like this: Many data analysis techniques such as machine learning and graph algorithms require iterative computations, this is where Bulk Synchronous Parallel model can be more effective than "plain" MapReduce. Therefore to run such iterative data analysis applications more efficiently, Hama offers pure Bulk Synchronous Parallel computing engine. As I wouldn't say MR is inherently not good for iterative computations, just BSP can be a better / more perfomant alternative. My 2 cents, Tommaso 2013/12/19 Edward J. Yoon <[email protected]> > Hi, > > I've made some changes to our website - > http://people.apache.org/~edwardyoon/site/ - Please review and feedback > here. > > -- > Best Regards, Edward J. Yoon > @eddieyoon >
