Sian, I like the latter. Is it ok to replace "consists of" by "is"? Independence is assumed by Apache anyway.
-- With best regards / с наилучшими пожеланиями, Alexei Fedotov / Алексей Федотов, http://dataved.ru/ +7 916 562 8095 On Wed, Nov 17, 2010 at 4:08 PM, Sian January <sianjanu...@googlemail.com> wrote: > In order to meet the ASF requirements[1] for the Harmony website we > need to have a one-sentence description of the project on our main web > page, the downloads page and in the DOAP file. It needs to describe > the 'product' itself rather than the community or the project aims. > > I haven't spent ages thinking about this but how about something like: > > "Apache Harmony software is an independent implementation of Java SE 5 > and 6 with a modular runtime architecture." > > or to be more general: > > "Apache Harmony software consists of a modular Java runtime and class > libraries." > > Any thoughts? > > Sian > > > > > [1] http://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/pmcs#naming > > -- > Unless stated otherwise above: > IBM United Kingdom Limited - Registered in England and Wales with number > 741598. > Registered office: PO Box 41, North Harbour, Portsmouth, Hampshire PO6 3AU >
