In message <aanlktikn8vzadwba8v-bv0q++aywk079o-h3hm8qz...@mail.gmail.com>, Sian January writes: > > Thanks to those who commented. I have checked this in today for > in order to get something up there that complies with the ASF > requirements, but I am happy to update it at a later date if anyone > wants to discuss the wording further.
Excellent. Thanks. > Is there anyone maintaining the Russian site who is able to translate > this and check it in? If not, can I suggest we consider removing the > Russian pages since they are starting to get out of date. +1. We should remove them. If someone steps in to update them then the old pages will be in svn. Currently the Russian pages are just misleading. -Mark > 2010/11/24 sebb <seb...@gmail.com>: > > 2010/11/24 Sian January <sianjanu...@googlemail.com>: > >> Yours sounds better but using "complete" could be a bit misleading > >> since Harmony is not yet complete. =9AI know that's not the intended > >> meaning but not everyone has English as their first language, so how > >> about: > >> > >> "Apache Harmony software is a modular Java runtime with class > >> libraries and associated tools"? > > > > That would be fine. > > > >> > >> > >> 2010/11/24 sebb <seb...@gmail.com>: > >>> 2010/11/24 Sian January <sianjanu...@googlemail.com>: > >>>> "Apache Harmony software is a modular Java runtime, class libraries > >>>> and associated tools"? > >>> > >>> Reads oddly to me - "is" should not be used with plurals (libraries, to= > ols). > >>> > >>> Perhaps > >>> > >>> "Apache Harmony software is a modular Java runtime, complete with > >>> class libraries > >>> and associated tools"? > >>> > >>>> > >>>> On 17 November 2010 13:33, Gregory Shimansky <gshiman...@gmail.com> wr= > ote: > >>>>> But it also includes JVMTI agent and some tools. So it is not only VM= > and > >>>>> class library. > >>>>> > >>>>> 17.11.2010 16:18, Alexei Fedotov =D0=C9=DB=C5=D4: > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Sian, > >>>>>> I like the latter. Is it ok to replace "consists of" by "is"? > >>>>>> Independence is assumed by Apache anyway. > >>>>>> > >>>>>> > >>>>>> > >>>>>> -- > >>>>>> With best regards / =D3 =CE=C1=C9=CC=D5=DE=DB=C9=CD=C9 =D0=CF=D6=C5= > =CC=C1=CE=C9=D1=CD=C9, > >>>>>> Alexei Fedotov / =E1=CC=C5=CB=D3=C5=CA =E6=C5=C4=CF=D4=CF=D7, > >>>>>> http://dataved.ru/ > >>>>>> +7 916 562 8095 > >>>>>> > >>>>>> > >>>>>> > >>>>>> > >>>>>> On Wed, Nov 17, 2010 at 4:08 PM, Sian January > >>>>>> <sianjanu...@googlemail.com> =9Awrote: > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> In order to meet the ASF requirements[1] for the Harmony website we > >>>>>>> need to have a one-sentence description of the project on our main = > web > >>>>>>> page, the downloads page and in the DOAP file. =9AIt needs to descr= > ibe > >>>>>>> the 'product' itself rather than the community or the project aims. > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> I haven't spent ages thinking about this but how about something li= > ke: > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> "Apache Harmony software is an independent implementation of Java S= > E 5 > >>>>>>> and 6 with a modular runtime architecture." > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> or to be more general: > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> "Apache Harmony software consists of a modular Java runtime and cla= > ss > >>>>>>> libraries." > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> Any thoughts? > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> Sian > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> [1] http://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/pmcs#naming > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> -- > >>>>>>> Unless stated otherwise above: > >>>>>>> IBM United Kingdom Limited - Registered in England and Wales with n= > umber > >>>>>>> 741598. > >>>>>>> Registered office: PO Box 41, North Harbour, Portsmouth, Hampshire = > PO6 > >>>>>>> 3AU > >>>>>>> > >>>>> > >>>>> > >>>> > >>>> > >>>> > >>>> -- > >>>> Unless stated otherwise above: > >>>> IBM United Kingdom Limited - Registered in England and Wales with numb= > er 741598. > >>>> Registered office: PO Box 41, North Harbour, Portsmouth, Hampshire PO6= > 3AU > >>>> > >>> > >> > >> > >> > >> -- > >> Unless stated otherwise above: > >> IBM United Kingdom Limited - Registered in England and Wales with number= > 741598. > >> Registered office: PO Box 41, North Harbour, Portsmouth, Hampshire PO6 3= > AU > >> > > > > > > --=20 > Unless stated otherwise above: > IBM United Kingdom Limited - Registered in England and Wales with number 74= > 1598. > Registered office: PO Box 41, North Harbour, Portsmouth, Hampshire PO6 3AU >
