On 1/23/06, Steven Pauwels <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
>
> Hi there,
>
> http://www.steven.be/OOo/bannerOOo2468x60.gif
>
> please comment.

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Very cool idea.  Very nice looking graphic!  Great job!


As I live in Belgium, language is a problem... In one office we can have
> 5 languages... duh... OOo is nice there... so what about... "free times
> another language equals free" as a marketing slogan? this is an issue in
> fi: Medecins sans frontieres... or other humanitairy orgs... languages...
>

As has been pointed out always is spelled with one L not two.  But you might
want to consider rewording it to say.

Try it free for 30 Days!

--- it free for ----!

Use it free for LIFE!

(or)

Use it free for EVER!

"for always" doesn't sound right.    And putting the word free before the
length of time makes it flow better, in my humble opinion.

Again, the concept is great.  I really like it.

Also, I agree with Steven, you might want to change "It's THE standard" to
"Open. For Business."

--
- Chad Smith
http://www.gimpshop.net/
Because everyone loves free software!

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