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Ship it!



docs/network-monitoring.md
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/24719/#comment88519>

    s/Our/The current/ ?
    
    can you expand on "will not notice any difference"? you mean no difference 
w.r.t getting a private bridge, NAT or anything like that right?



docs/network-monitoring.md
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/24719/#comment88520>

    s/Prerequisite/Prerequisites/



docs/network-monitoring.md
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/24719/#comment88521>

    s/our code/Mesos/



docs/network-monitoring.md
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/24719/#comment88522>

    Can you update the "getting started doc" too w.r.t these pre-reqs for 
network monitoring?



docs/network-monitoring.md
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/24719/#comment88523>

    is there an authoritative doc that we can link to for more info on "network 
namespaces"?



docs/network-monitoring.md
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/24719/#comment88524>

    s/port/ports/ ?



docs/network-monitoring.md
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/24719/#comment88526>

    s/previously/ pre 0.20.0/
    
    or maybe
    
    s/previously/without network monitoring/
    
    s/non of the/none of the/
    
    s/host process is/host processes are/



docs/network-monitoring.md
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/24719/#comment88527>

    s/squeeze/squeeze and reboot/



docs/network-monitoring.md
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/24719/#comment88528>

    Also, note that they need to add "network/portmapping" to --isolation flag.
    
    s/resource/resource (via '--resources' flag)/
    
    s/wanna/want to/ :)



docs/network-monitoring.md
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/24719/#comment88529>

    s/this is/these are/



docs/network-monitoring.md
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/24719/#comment88530>

    give a random executor_id, executor_name and source instead of 
"aurora/thermos" :)


- Vinod Kone


On Aug. 15, 2014, 12:13 a.m., Jie Yu wrote:
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> (Updated Aug. 15, 2014, 12:13 a.m.)
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> Review request for mesos, Chi Zhang, Ian Downes, Vinod Kone, and Cong Wang.
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> Repository: mesos-git
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> Description
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> See summary
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> Diffs
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>   docs/network-monitoring.md PRE-CREATION 
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> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/24719/diff/
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> Testing
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> checked the markdown syntax
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> Thanks,
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> Jie Yu
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