Very good! I have a couple of editing suggestions, if it is not too late.
The line
"Those with access (and this may has geo-based access restrictions) can see
scene starting at the 8:50 mark on ABC's online version of the
episode<http://abc.go.com/watch/suburgatory/SH55126593/VDKA0_2durzflg/apocalypse-meow>."
Should be
"Those with access (and this may have geo-based access restrictions) can
see the scene starting at the 8:50 mark on ABC's online version of the
episode<http://abc.go.com/watch/suburgatory/SH55126593/VDKA0_2durzflg/apocalypse-meow>
."
Francis


On Thu, Apr 18, 2013 at 10:58 AM, Kay Schenk <kay.sch...@gmail.com> wrote:

> On Thu, Apr 18, 2013 at 8:48 AM, Rob Weir <robw...@apache.org> wrote:
>
> >
> >
> https://blogs.apache.org/preview/OOo/?previewEntry=with_special_guest_star_apache
> >
> > This is time-sensitive, so I'd like to get this out this afternoon.
> >
> > Thanks!
> >
> > -Rob
> >
>
> Go Tessa! Go AOO! and dang, sorry I missed this episode! :/
> Yep, good to go!
>
>
> --
>
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> MzK
>
> "There's no upside in screwing with things you can't explain."
>                         -- Captain Roy Montgomery, "Castle"
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