On Thu, May 9, 2013 at 2:20 PM, Rob Weir <robw...@apache.org> wrote: > The above steps could take a week, or if you have any comments in the > current draft, best to send them along via email.
Kevin Grignon's paragraph: "submissions where enhanced" -> "submissions were enhanced", though this is from a designer's quote Michael Acevedo's paragraph: "and find ways to improve" -> "and finding ways to improve" or "and ways to improve" or "and how to improve" Suggestion: "design is from Robin Fowler, takes" -> "design from Robin Fowler takes" Don
