Howdy all, Well, a little more work and some feedback led to this - which I now really need feedback from you guys on.
A couple of small changes - I noted the discussion on the mailing list regarding the users posting to the dev mailing list, so I updated the paragraph on the back cover to remove the reference to the dev list (I have not updated the UnivStudent flyer to reflect this yet, but will) Some small typographic changes on the front cover and rear cover, dropped the wire frame from the front page (inside flap), left it on the second page - though I have two votes to dump it from there also. Anyway - the real focus, if I may draw you there, is again the why AOO column. The bullet items are the points that I would like to make, but they could I'm sure be made better. The lower section AOO is ODF compliant and AOO is a community I'm not really comfortable with. I lifted some of the text from that 2.0 flyer, the sentence with company names and I suppose for instance PeopleSoft no longer gets a break out, it's just Oracle now, right.. anyhow you input is very. So - I guess I'll just use google still: pdf https://docs.google.com/file/d/0Bx7ZNEXlmR0IU2ZJbHVsQ2pOa3M odt https://docs.google.com/file/d/0Bx7ZNEXlmR0IWERCRVozbFBkYVk Thanks in advance for you time, //drew On Fri, Sep 6, 2013 at 11:58 AM, Drew Jensen <drewjensen.in...@gmail.com>wrote: > > On Tue, Sep 3, 2013 at 7:38 PM, Drew Jensen <drewjensen.in...@gmail.com>wrote: > >> Juergen > > > I started on an SME (which I suppose is Small /Medium Enterprise) piece, > it's not that far along with respect to the Why column - but I did make a > change to the graphical content, based on Juergen's comment regarding > icons. So I'll put this up to google also, it's a throw back again to 2.0 > branding, with the new color. > > pdf > https://docs.google.com/file/d/0Bx7ZNEXlmR0IWFpNd3dSOTBCN3c > odt > https://docs.google.com/file/d/0Bx7ZNEXlmR0IZklSaHFSTk84Umc > and the updated svg for the wireframe > https://docs.google.com/file/d/0Bx7ZNEXlmR0IMzU0bnotSHFVMzA > > Anyway - SME is too broad for my purpose here and I will work tonight to > focus a bit more on: > Clerical staff and part-time elected officials in very small > municipalities, which is the demographic of the room where my friend will > be pitching his services.. > > As always - I don't own this stuff, feel free to make it better... > > //drew >
