Looks good. Mind that you left in the English language version the slogan "die free ..." on the bottom.
Suggestion: Consider writing supported OS in 2 lines, rather than breaking the line after "For". בתאריך יום ה׳, 11 באוק׳ 2018, 3:20, מאת Carl Marcum <cmar...@apache.org>: > > > On 10/09/2018 05:41 AM, Peter Kovacs wrote: > > Hi all, > > > > the german community has updated our flyers. > > > > Current Version can be found at [1] > > > > If you are french or english native speaker, please have a look. > > > > And give some feedback, thanks. > > > > > > All the best > > > > Peter > > > > [1] > > https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1kpVknzJfZwuV5TOFvezg1V_TZLoSgYaY > > > > Hi Peter, > > I can help with the English version if I can get it in a format I can > cut/paste paragraphs out of without going across the tri-folds. > > A few quick ones... > > change: > WasWhat is Apache OpenOffice? > to: > What is Apache OpenOffice? > > change: > Apache OpenOffice is portabel : > to: > Apache OpenOffice is portable : > > Thanks, > Carl > > --------------------------------------------------------------------- > To unsubscribe, e-mail: dev-unsubscr...@openoffice.apache.org > For additional commands, e-mail: dev-h...@openoffice.apache.org > >
