wow - i was about to test all the urls today. wonder why they're all hosed up. thanks.
On Tue, Jan 26, 2016 at 8:41 AM, Marko Rodriguez <[email protected]> wrote: > Hello, > > First off Stephen, this is a beautiful tutorial. Well done. Nice graphics > too :D. > > Here is a list of comments for you to do with as you please: > > * Its called "The Gremlin Console" but the URL is > advanced-console. I would renamed the file to the-gremlin-console. > * "The First Five Minutes" link is bad. > * "reference documentation" link is bad. > * "features of the Gremlin Console, through a number " … no comma > needed between Console and through. > * "The following points summarize the key features discussed in > each of the use cases:" should read "The following points summarize the key > features of each use case:" > * I would have an IMPORTANT saying why graph and g are different > right after your first code snippet. > * createTheCrew needs to be createTheCrew(). > * Lots of bad URLs in the "A Learning Tool" section. Check them > all out. > * Note that "reference documentation" is now nested in the > directory structure of our docs :| … thus, all such links are bad. > * I would add an IMPORTANT about import static > org.apache.tinkerpop.gremlin.process.traversal.dsl.graph.__.*; > * "it iterates the entries() " should be "it iterates the > entrySet()". > * "It is possible to prevent auto-iteration" doesn't need to be a > new paragraph. > * g.V().has('name', name).drop(); --- your Java examples need " > not ' … i.e. "name" (there are a couple of these) > * The first reference to Cassandra should say "Apache Cassandra" > and URL link to it. > * When you mention "firstYear" you should say something like "note > that we use next() to get the value and save it to the variable." > * Your code examples have some extreme indenting here and there. > Might want to tighten that up. > * I would not use sideEffect{} in your last example. Instead use > forEachRemaining{ }… This way there is no "it" to explain and its more > natural as it both iterates() (is terminal) and you don't need the ;null. > > Man…what an epic piece of work. You must feel good about yourself. > > Take care, > Marko. > > http://markorodriguez.com > > On Jan 25, 2016, at 6:06 PM, Stephen Mallette <[email protected]> > wrote: > > > To keep with the pattern of having at least one new tutorial with every > > release, I wrote a fresh tutorial about the Gremlin Console. It seeks to > > address the kinds of questions we repeatedly get over and over again > while > > providing some common use cases. It will be nice to reply to folks with > > links to parts of this tutorial rather than having to type the same > answers > > over and over again. I took the same approach as the last tutorial and > > sought a familiar style with copious use of the word "you" - a style of > > writing I sorta struggle with, but again, i think that style is good for > > the "tutorial" pattern. > > > > > http://tinkerpop.apache.org/docs/3.1.1-SNAPSHOT/tutorials/advanced-console/ > > > > Anyway, please feel free to provide some feedback so that I can get this > > guy finalized in time for 3.1.1-incubating next week. > >
