Hi,
You mean:
http://tinkerpop.apache.org/docs/3.1.1-SNAPSHOT/tutorials/the-gremlin-console/
Marko.
http://markorodriguez.com
On Jan 26, 2016, at 12:21 PM, Stephen Mallette <[email protected]> wrote:
> I moved the tutorial as marko suggested - the new URL is:
>
> http://tinkerpop.apache.org/docs/3.1.1-SNAPSHOT/tutorials/advanced-console/
>
> On Tue, Jan 26, 2016 at 8:44 AM, Stephen Mallette <[email protected]>
> wrote:
>
>> wow - i was about to test all the urls today. wonder why they're all
>> hosed up. thanks.
>>
>> On Tue, Jan 26, 2016 at 8:41 AM, Marko Rodriguez <[email protected]>
>> wrote:
>>
>>> Hello,
>>>
>>> First off Stephen, this is a beautiful tutorial. Well done. Nice graphics
>>> too :D.
>>>
>>> Here is a list of comments for you to do with as you please:
>>>
>>> * Its called "The Gremlin Console" but the URL is
>>> advanced-console. I would renamed the file to the-gremlin-console.
>>> * "The First Five Minutes" link is bad.
>>> * "reference documentation" link is bad.
>>> * "features of the Gremlin Console, through a number " … no comma
>>> needed between Console and through.
>>> * "The following points summarize the key features discussed in
>>> each of the use cases:" should read "The following points summarize the key
>>> features of each use case:"
>>> * I would have an IMPORTANT saying why graph and g are different
>>> right after your first code snippet.
>>> * createTheCrew needs to be createTheCrew().
>>> * Lots of bad URLs in the "A Learning Tool" section. Check them
>>> all out.
>>> * Note that "reference documentation" is now nested in the
>>> directory structure of our docs :| … thus, all such links are bad.
>>> * I would add an IMPORTANT about import static
>>> org.apache.tinkerpop.gremlin.process.traversal.dsl.graph.__.*;
>>> * "it iterates the entries() " should be "it iterates the
>>> entrySet()".
>>> * "It is possible to prevent auto-iteration" doesn't need to be a
>>> new paragraph.
>>> * g.V().has('name', name).drop(); --- your Java examples need "
>>> not ' … i.e. "name" (there are a couple of these)
>>> * The first reference to Cassandra should say "Apache Cassandra"
>>> and URL link to it.
>>> * When you mention "firstYear" you should say something like
>>> "note that we use next() to get the value and save it to the variable."
>>> * Your code examples have some extreme indenting here and there.
>>> Might want to tighten that up.
>>> * I would not use sideEffect{} in your last example. Instead use
>>> forEachRemaining{ }… This way there is no "it" to explain and its more
>>> natural as it both iterates() (is terminal) and you don't need the ;null.
>>>
>>> Man…what an epic piece of work. You must feel good about yourself.
>>>
>>> Take care,
>>> Marko.
>>>
>>> http://markorodriguez.com
>>>
>>> On Jan 25, 2016, at 6:06 PM, Stephen Mallette <[email protected]>
>>> wrote:
>>>
>>>> To keep with the pattern of having at least one new tutorial with every
>>>> release, I wrote a fresh tutorial about the Gremlin Console. It seeks
>>> to
>>>> address the kinds of questions we repeatedly get over and over again
>>> while
>>>> providing some common use cases. It will be nice to reply to folks with
>>>> links to parts of this tutorial rather than having to type the same
>>> answers
>>>> over and over again. I took the same approach as the last tutorial and
>>>> sought a familiar style with copious use of the word "you" - a style of
>>>> writing I sorta struggle with, but again, i think that style is good for
>>>> the "tutorial" pattern.
>>>>
>>>>
>>> http://tinkerpop.apache.org/docs/3.1.1-SNAPSHOT/tutorials/advanced-console/
>>>>
>>>> Anyway, please feel free to provide some feedback so that I can get this
>>>> guy finalized in time for 3.1.1-incubating next week.
>>>
>>>
>>
