Thanks for the feedback, I should have a new version finished this evening,
or tomorrow afternoon.
In regards to the size, I'm still playing with encoding settings, I'm trying
to reduce the size but keep the text legible.

    Dan



Martijn Dashorst wrote:
> 
> First of all: Great work, great quality!
> 
> Comments:
>  - you can shortly introduce Wicket: "Wicket is an open source java web
> application framework"
>  - use automatic import from eclipse, no need to import yourself
> (ctrl-shift-o)
>  - just start typing "HelloWorld extends WebPage" and press <ctrl-space>
> to
> import the correct class.
>  - same for the label: add(new Label<ctrl-space>
>  - editing the markup file: talk about the wicket:id when you add it to
> the
> tag ("the wicket identifier must be the same as the identifier in the java
> file. this way Wicket knows which part of the markup to render the hello
> world text in")
>  - editing the web.xml: use copy paste to speed up editing the file :)
> 
> Overall: great quality, perhaps we should tune down the size of the
> download
> (higher compression?).
> 
> For future examples/screencasts: don't throw away the existing files, but
> reuse them. This will keep your viewers tuned in.
> 
> I like it!!! MORE MORE MORE!!!
> 
> Martijn
> 
> 
> On Dec 2, 2007 3:39 PM, Gerolf Seitz <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> 
>> hi,
>> the first screen cast is ready for a review[0] [1].
>> the screen cast is 7:51 long and about 32MB of size. don't let the size
>> prevent you from downloading it, as we can tell dan, the student, to
>> compress it more.
>>
>> in addition to the hello world project it self, dan also gives detailed
>> instructions on how to use the quickstart archetype (even though he
>> deletes
>> the java and html files later on).
>>
>> one thing i noticed is that he used the phrase "import the WebApplication
>> package" (should actually be "import the WebApplication class").
>> he could have talked a bit more, imho.
>>
>> feedback is much appreciated ;)
>>
>>  Gerolf
>>
>> [0] http://rapidshare.com/files/73783912/screencast.avi.html (should be
>> faster than dan's server)
>> [1] ftp://67.163.28.205 (selfhosted by dan)
>>
> 
> 
> 
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