Hi all, Dan just uploaded the second version of the screen cast [0]. he even used the new cmd line generator ;)
open issues: * at around 4:45, there seem to be two audio tracks overlapping. * the screen cast seems to end a bit too early. the video stops while you are announcing "wicket.apache.org" Again, great work :) Regards, Gerolf [0]http://rapidshare.com/files/74620970/hello.flv.html On Dec 2, 2007 8:47 PM, Dan Whitlow <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > Thanks for the feedback, I should have a new version finished this > evening, > or tomorrow afternoon. > In regards to the size, I'm still playing with encoding settings, I'm > trying > to reduce the size but keep the text legible. > > Dan > > > > Martijn Dashorst wrote: > > > > First of all: Great work, great quality! > > > > Comments: > > - you can shortly introduce Wicket: "Wicket is an open source java web > > application framework" > > - use automatic import from eclipse, no need to import yourself > > (ctrl-shift-o) > > - just start typing "HelloWorld extends WebPage" and press <ctrl-space> > > to > > import the correct class. > > - same for the label: add(new Label<ctrl-space> > > - editing the markup file: talk about the wicket:id when you add it to > > the > > tag ("the wicket identifier must be the same as the identifier in the > java > > file. this way Wicket knows which part of the markup to render the hello > > world text in") > > - editing the web.xml: use copy paste to speed up editing the file :) > > > > Overall: great quality, perhaps we should tune down the size of the > > download > > (higher compression?). > > > > For future examples/screencasts: don't throw away the existing files, > but > > reuse them. This will keep your viewers tuned in. > > > > I like it!!! MORE MORE MORE!!! > > > > Martijn > > > > > > On Dec 2, 2007 3:39 PM, Gerolf Seitz <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > > >> hi, > >> the first screen cast is ready for a review[0] [1]. > >> the screen cast is 7:51 long and about 32MB of size. don't let the size > >> prevent you from downloading it, as we can tell dan, the student, to > >> compress it more. > >> > >> in addition to the hello world project it self, dan also gives detailed > >> instructions on how to use the quickstart archetype (even though he > >> deletes > >> the java and html files later on). > >> > >> one thing i noticed is that he used the phrase "import the > WebApplication > >> package" (should actually be "import the WebApplication class"). > >> he could have talked a bit more, imho. > >> > >> feedback is much appreciated ;) > >> > >> Gerolf > >> > >> [0] http://rapidshare.com/files/73783912/screencast.avi.html (should be > >> faster than dan's server) > >> [1] ftp://67.163.28.205 (selfhosted by dan) > >> > > > > > > > > -- > > Buy Wicket in Action: http://manning.com/dashorst > > Apache Wicket 1.3.0-rc1 is released > > Get it now: http://www.apache.org/dyn/closer.cgi/wicket/1.3.0-rc1/ > > > > > > -- > View this message in context: > http://www.nabble.com/please-review-for-ghop-task-3---screen-cast-hello-worl-tf4931900.html#a14119214 > Sent from the Wicket - Dev mailing list archive at Nabble.com. > >
