On 05/02/2012 08:47 PM, Kalev Lember wrote: > On 05/01/2012 07:25 PM, Jared K. Smith wrote: >> I've got to be honest here -- I don't like the wording of the >> notification. /.../ > > Pádraig, Jared, Chris: > > Thanks for the suggestions >
> How about this as the main text: > You are currently running Fedora from live media. > If you are ready, you can install Fedora now, or choose "Install to Hard > Drive" in the Activities overview at any later time. "If you are ready" is a bit redundant. How about. You are currently running Fedora from live media. You can install Fedora now, or choose "Install to Hard Drive" in the Activities overview at any later time. I'm happy with any of the subsequent suggestions, so feel free to commit without further input from me anyway. cheers, Pádraig. -- devel mailing list devel@lists.fedoraproject.org https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/devel
