"Brad Roberts" <bra...@puremagic.com> wrote in message news:mailman.61.1283409922.858.digitalmar...@puremagic.com... > On 9/1/2010 11:28 PM, Nick Sabalausky wrote: >> >> I hope it started with "It was a dark and stormy night" :) >> > > Sadly no.. that'd be cliched but not bad enough. Hopefully this doesn't > push > the bounds of fair use too far. The first several lines: > > Chapter 1 > > Pain. > Whispering voices. > Pain. > Pain. Pain. Pain. > Need pee -- new pain -- what are they sticking in me? ... > Sleep. > Pain. > Whispering voices. > "As you know, Nurse Eastman, the government spooks controlling this > hospital > will not permit me to give this patient the care I think he needs." > "Yes, doctor." The voice was breathy, sweet, so sweet and sexy. > > --- > > Actually, that part's not THAT bad, by itself.. but it certainly isn't > anywhere > near good.
lol, Oh man, that's great (in a bad way, of course) :) Now you've got me *really* wanting to read it. I haven't laughed that hard at, umm, "literature" since Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy. I keep laughing harder every time I re-read it, He said. His voice breathy, sweet, so sweet and sexy. Pain. Need pee :)
