On 14/11/2011 01:50, Andrei Alexandrescu wrote:
Walter and I have been working on the website for a while. We want to
crystallize a clear message of what the D programming language is.

Please take a look at http://d-programming-language.org/new/. The work
is content-only (no significant changes in style, though collapsible
examples and twitter news are a new style element).

Feedback is welcome.


Thanks,

Andrei

 - From the first look at the page it's a big block of text with no
   code. Very off putting from a programming language home page.
    - My advise here would be to *just* show the key bullet points,
      click for more information.
 - It's covered in buzz words. Are you trying to appeal to managers or
   programmers?
 - "See example." is actually show/hide example, the text should
   reflect this.
 - Community
    - Maybe mention the IRC channel #D on freenode.
    - There's no need for the "Walter Bright" name-drop, particularly in
      a community section (Walter is not the community!)
 - Contribute
    - First thing I see is a bullet pointed list of compilers, DMD is
      not listed, perhaps the surrounding text needs to be re-worded
    - inconsistent capitalization of (C|c)ompiler
    - Definitely needs a "Fork us on github" banner of some sort

A key thing I find missing is code - the first thing I want to see when I visit the home page of a new language is sample code.

My advise here would be to always have a code section on one side, then have more information on the other, describing what the code is demonstrating. Something like http://imgur.com/QL619 where the right hand side would have code, the left hand side your 3 key points.

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Robert
http://octarineparrot.com/

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