Dirk, Thanks for a careful proof-reading. I will make the corrections in the future version.
H Anthony Chan -----Original Message----- From: dmm-boun...@ietf.org [mailto:dmm-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of dirk.von-h...@telekom.de Sent: Tuesday, June 26, 2012 10:35 AM To: jouni.nos...@gmail.com; dmm@ietf.org Cc: dmm-cha...@tools.ietf.org Subject: Re: [DMM] WG Call for adoption: draft-chan-dmm-requirements-02 Dear all, I am also in favour of WG adoption of the draft since it discusses very detailed motivation, problems, and requirements of DMM approach. To the authors: I propose to take in to consideration correction of some very minor nits as follows in the next version: Page 6: In Fig. 1 beside LMA/MAG for PMIP also a FA is shown with MIPv6 referenced - shouldn't this be then the MN directly? [Paper-New.Perspective] is not referenced Page 7: mobility management functional blocks can be groups => mobility management functional blocks can be grouped will retrieve the location information of an MN is stored. => will retrieve the stored location information of an MN./will retrieve the location information of an MN which is stored in the table. Page 8: deployment in Section 4 => deployment in Section 3.1 Page 9: a stable IP home IP address => a stable IP home address / a stable home IP address Page 10: dmm => DMM (3 times) Page 11: O-PS2: Complicated deployment with too many variants and extensions of MIP Deployment is complicated with many variants and extensions of MIP. When introducing new functions which may add to the complicity, existing solutions are more vulnerable => O-PS2: Complicated deployment with too many variants and extensions of MIP Deployment is complicated with many variants and extensions of MIP. When introducing new functions which may add to the complexity, existing solutions are more vulnerable Best regards Dirk Von: dmm-boun...@ietf.org [mailto:dmm-boun...@ietf.org] Im Auftrag von jouni korhonen Gesendet: Mittwoch, 20. Juni 2012 10:52 An: dmm@ietf.org Cc: dmm-cha...@tools.ietf.org Betreff: [DMM] WG Call for adoption: draft-chan-dmm-requirements-02 Folks, We have a good start with the requirements document in http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-chan-dmm-requirements-02 and the chairs think it is time to catch up with the charter regarding the Solution Requirements. We are a bit ahead purposely so that we have one official document to work on and discuss before the face to face meeting in Vancouver. This email starts a 2-week consensus call on adopting Title : Requirements of distributed mobility management Author(s) : H Anthony Chan Filename : draft-chan-dmm-requirements-02.txt Pages : 16 Date : 2012-06-14 as a DMM WG document. Please, read the current revision and state you opinion either for or against adoption (and with reasoning why) in the mailing list. The call for adoption ends 4th July 2012. - Jouni & Julien _______________________________________________ dmm mailing list dmm@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dmm _______________________________________________ dmm mailing list dmm@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dmm _______________________________________________ dmm mailing list dmm@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dmm
