Todd Glassey CISM CIFI wrote: > Doug Barton wrote: >> Abstract: The last paragraph is awkward. Perhaps: >> This document discusses the requirements of a management >> system for DNS name servers and can be used as a shopping >> list of needed features for such a system. >> > > As long as you are being nit picky the phrase "(Domain Name Service) > name servers" reads kinda funny. How about just DNS Resolver's or > something like that?
That part of the sentence I quoted verbatim from the existing text in an effort to minimize the changes. I think removing "DNS" from the original further improves the text along the lines you pointed out. Good catch, Doug _______________________________________________ DNSOP mailing list DNSOP@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnsop
