At 09:31 18-03-2009, Peter Koch wrote:
this is to initiate a working group last call on
"Requirements for Management of Name Servers for the DNS"
draft-ietf-dnsop-name-server-management-reqs-02.txt
From the Abstract:
"Management of name servers for the Domain Name Service (DNS) has
traditionally been done using vendor-specific monitoring,
configuration and control methods."
Shouldn't that be Domain Name System? That's what DNS stands for in
RFC 1034. "Domain Name Service" could be changed throughout the
document to "Domain Name System". There are several places in the
document where "DNS service" is used.
In Section 2.1.2
"Finding and managing large quantities of name servers would be a useful
feature of the resulting management solution."
I suggest "a large number" instead of large quantities".
Regards,
-sm
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