Jinmei-san, thanks very much for your detailed comments.

I also received IPR claim from Nominum.

  https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/2907/
  https://patents.google.com/patent/US7769826B2/

I {will,need to} remove detailed algorithm {,to avoid IPR}.

Then, I will change the main contents to focus on problem collection
and proposal of requirements.

> From: 神明達哉 <jin...@wide.ad.jp>
> - general: the title and file name seem to be too generic for the
>   actual content.  I suggest making them more specific, focusing on
>   the subject of this draft.

Agree.
(I will submit next version to remove detailed algorithm to avoid IPR problem.)

> - Section 1
> 
>    [...] And it may break requirements of resolvers'
>    answers described in Section 3.2.
> 
>   I don't get it.  Specifically which requirement does this refer to?
>   And, specifically how this override break that requirement?

Ok, I will add more text...

> - Section 3.1
> 
>    As described above, parent side NS RRSet makes a new zone.  Parent
>    side NS RRSet (referral) and glue records are all the information to
>    access servers for the child zone.
> 
>    That is, resolvers SHOULD NOT use child side NS RRSet to iterate
>    zones.
> 
>   There seems to be a logical leap between the first and second
>   paragraph; I don't get why we SHOULD NOT use the child side NS
>   RRset for subsequent iteration simply because the parent NS RRset is
>   used for the iteration first time (which I guess the first para
>   tries to say).  In fact, the child side NS RRset might be a more
>   complete, accurate and up to date set of the NS, while some part of
>   the parent NS RRset may be unusable.  This is related to the high
>   level comment I made in my previous message - I see and support the
>   seeming background motivation of this requirement, but I believe we
>   need more careful considerations and probably a much less drastic
>   update.

I agree that we need more careful consideration.

> - Section 4
> 
>    However, people sets different NS RRSets with mistakes, or
>    intentionally.
> 
>   Specifically what kind of intent does this "intentionally" mean?

I considered "intentionally means "malicious idea".

next version will relfect your excellent comment.

Regards,

--
Kazunori Fujiwara, JPRS <fujiw...@jprs.co.jp>

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