While I am reviewing this version of the draft, the other problem I see is a block of text that reads:
"RFC 8145 relies on resolvers reporting the list of keys that they have to root servers.” The grammatical construction is ambiguous - I suspect that whoever originally submitted this tect back for the -03 version meant to say: "RFC 8145 relies on resolvers reporting towards the root servers a list of locally cached trust anchors for the root zone.” The document also makes the comment: "The authors (gratefully) accept pull requests.”. I suspect a more prudent course of action from now on is that “The authors will refer all pull requests to this working group before applying any changes to the draft.” Geoff _______________________________________________ DNSOP mailing list DNSOP@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnsop