On Aug 3, 2022, at 6:48 AM, Gavin McCullagh <gmccull...@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> 
> > Nonetheless, the significant deployment of
> > DNSSEC within some top-level domains (TLDs), and the near-universal
> >  deployment of DNSSEC in the TLDs, demonstrate that DNSSEC is suitable
> >   for implementation by both ordinary and highly sophisticated domain
> >   owners.
> 
> Maybe it's my lack of dns inside baseball terminology

Nope; it was just my unclear writing.

> but I found the hard distinction between "within" and "in" a bit confusing 
> here and had to re-read to grok what was meant.  It might be clearer to 
> contrast e.g. "at the TLDs" with "below/within some TLDs" to bring out the 
> distinction.

Proposed fix:

Nonetheless, the significant deployment of DNSSEC beneath some top-level 
domains (TLDs),
and the near-universal deployment of DNSSEC for the TLDs in the DNS root zone,

> 
> >    *  [RFC7344] describes using the CDS and CDNSKEY resource records to
> >      help automate the creation of DS records in the parents of signed
> >      zones.
> 
> The term used in the RFC is "maintenance" as opposed to "creation" which 
> seems more precise, given that CDS does not directly address initial creation 
> of a DS.

Good catch! Fixed.

--Paul Hoffman

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