I have made all of the edits suggested by Czeslaw. There are a couple of cases where I had questions and those are noted in the commit messages. Before I push my commits, I'd like to get confirmation from Keith that I am not going to cause problems with any of his work on the Getting Started guide. All of the revised documents are in the Review folder in my local repository.. I did not change the documents in the top level folder or in the ForWiki folder. However, the versions in the Review folder seemed to be later versions than the ones in ForWiki. I would have expected ForWiki and Review to be identical immediately after documents were posted to the wiki, which I thought was the state we were in. Have I misunderstood the intent of the Review and ForWiki folders? Regards, Francis
On Sat, Feb 4, 2023 at 11:08 AM F Campos Costero <fjcc.apa...@gmail.com> wrote: > I have implemented Czeslaw's edits as far as chapter 8. I should get > through all of them early next week. I will then push the revised versions > to the Review folder. The edits on chapter 7 were excellent. I had largely > rewritten that chapter and it certainly benefited from the revisions. > > Regards, > Francis > > On Sun, Jan 29, 2023 at 8:06 PM Czesław Wolański < > czeslaw.wolan...@gmail.com> wrote: > >> Hi, >> >> Remarks on Chapter 7 >> .pdf file is available at the following link: >> >> >> https://drive.google.com/file/d/1HPjbs4wYTOLeimnQ_hnu6-OHq056wWJO/view?usp=share_link >> >> >> Regards, >> Czesław >> >> Am Sa., 7. Jan. 2023 um 18:50 Uhr schrieb Czesław Wolański < >> czeslaw.wolan...@gmail.com>: >> >> > Hi, >> > >> > Remarks on Chapter 9 >> > >> > ZIP archive is available at the link given below. >> > >> > >> > >> https://drive.google.com/file/d/1EXS3c50bXaeuULNujkbfc5eEpgRpO6dF/view?usp=sharing >> > >> > >> > Regards, >> > Czesław >> > >> > вс, 1 янв. 2023 г. в 05:45, Czesław Wolański < >> czeslaw.wolan...@gmail.com>: >> > >> >> Hi, >> >> >> >> Remarks on Chapter 5 >> >> >> >> ZIP archive is available at the following link: >> >> >> >> >> >> >> https://drive.google.com/file/d/1zaL0muMZCYnV7f7na9_l_EycBgCS1wL4/view?usp=share_link >> >> >> >> >> >> Regards, >> >> Czesław >> >> >> >> Am Fr., 30. Dez. 2022 um 16:50 Uhr schrieb Czesław Wolański < >> >> czeslaw.wolan...@gmail.com>: >> >> >> >>> Hi, >> >>> >> >>> Remarks on Chapter 4 >> >>> >> >>> A .pdf file can be downloaded from the following link: >> >>> >> >>> >> >>> >> https://drive.google.com/file/d/1bavwXS85pY3y163vtDKaEh37hzow7FFS/view?usp=share_link >> >>> >> >>> >> >>> Regards, >> >>> Czesław >> >>> >> >>> Am So., 18. Dez. 2022 um 06:41 Uhr schrieb Czesław Wolański < >> >>> czeslaw.wolan...@gmail.com>: >> >>> >> >>>> Hi, >> >>>> >> >>>> Remarks on Chapter 8 and 10 >> >>>> >> >>>> ZIP archive is available at the link given below. >> >>>> >> >>>> >> >>>> >> https://drive.google.com/file/d/1OQlQgdIST_FgJI8s4RrRGGQi1HlbO94j/view?usp=share_link >> >>>> >> >>>> >> >>>> Regards, >> >>>> Czesław >> >>>> >> >>>> Am Fr., 16. Dez. 2022 um 19:10 Uhr schrieb Czesław Wolański < >> >>>> czeslaw.wolan...@gmail.com>: >> >>>> >> >>>>> Hi, >> >>>>> >> >>>>> Remarks on Chapter 3 >> >>>>> .pdf file is available at the following link: >> >>>>> >> >>>>> >> >>>>> >> https://drive.google.com/file/d/1gfCKT_4Oafl4hAlA2C9rbiAZ-_p1RiHF/view?usp=share_link >> >>>>> >> >>>>> >> >>>>> Regards, >> >>>>> Czesław >> >>>>> >> >>>>> Am Do., 15. Dez. 2022 um 12:19 Uhr schrieb Czesław Wolański < >> >>>>> czeslaw.wolan...@gmail.com>: >> >>>>> >> >>>>>> Hi, >> >>>>>> >> >>>>>> Remarks on Chapter 2 and 6. >> >>>>>> ZIP archive can be downloaded from the following link: >> >>>>>> >> >>>>>> >> >>>>>> >> https://drive.google.com/file/d/1C8kkHWkF0IiSbokMZzVZG5jzR1sTjyTe/view?usp=share_link >> >>>>>> >> >>>>>> Regards, >> >>>>>> Czesław >> >>>>>> >> >>>>>> Am Mi., 14. Dez. 2022 um 22:51 Uhr schrieb Czesław Wolański < >> >>>>>> czeslaw.wolan...@gmail.com>: >> >>>>>> >> >>>>>>> Hi, >> >>>>>>> >> >>>>>>> First of all, I would like to thank again everyone involved in the >> >>>>>>> work on the 4.1 Getting Started Guide. >> >>>>>>> >> >>>>>>> I have and will have remarks on the Guide. To begin with, Chapter >> 11: >> >>>>>>> >> >>>>>>> ZIP archive is available at the link given below. >> >>>>>>> >> >>>>>>> >> >>>>>>> >> https://drive.google.com/file/d/14BmyeqZC6C2wL4vy312TdOlkWpi_482j/view?usp=share_link >> >>>>>>> >> >>>>>>> >> >>>>>>> Regards, >> >>>>>>> Czesław >> >>>>>>> >> >>>>>> >> >
