At 23:57 19.04.2002, Bill Moseley wrote:
Ok, here's a ten minute edit:

  http://hank.org:5000/about/about.html

I'm a shitty writer, but does that seem somewhat in line with what others
are thinking?  Too colorful?  Suggestions?

Everyone knows that I like white space, right?

Looks good. s/Excelerate/Accelerate/ though.
But you're overdoing it a little on whitespace :) You should maybe try using <dl>, <dt>, <dd> instead of blockquotes (which aren't meant to be used just to indent text).



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