I have put a copy of this in the feedback folder on the ODF site. It contains Mark's comments on content and a lot of small stylistic changes by me.
As a general comment, I don't agree with Dan's use of "DBMS" and "RDBMS", as I think these terms should refer to software (such as Base), not to data. My preferred terms are "database" and "relational database". -- Hazel Russman <hazeldeb...@googlemail.com> -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to documentation+h...@global.libreoffice.org Problems? http://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/documentation/ All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted
