Am 04.02.20 um 00:21 schrieb Matias Fonzo: > El 2020-02-02 10:45, Michael Siegel escribió: >> >> Well, as I've stated earlier, I thought the version before 2019-12-29[1] >> was quite viable already and just needed a few adjustments, some of >> which I suggested in two messages to this mailing list on 2019-12-28 and >> 2019-12-29: >> >> https://lists.nongnu.org/archive/html/dragora-users/2019-12/msg00007.html > > Okay. I have made the changes as you suggested in the previous message > ^. Also trying an explanation for <Space>, <Enter>. Let me know what > you think.
That looks really good! Only two minor issues: #1 “Use the cursor keys to move around the installer's menus.” It needs to be “move around in the installer's menus.” #2 “Remember that you can use [Ctrl]+[C] to abort the installation at any time.” I would omit “Remember that” at the beginning of the sentence. It's not wrong, but it simply seems a bit weird. I could try to explain that further, if you're interested. > P.S: I haven't uploaded the package for these changes yet, as I'm in the > bootstrap process. That's fine. Just take your time. Thanks Michael
