Am 05.02.20 um 01:09 schrieb Matias Fonzo:
> El 2020-02-04 20:50, Michael Siegel escribió:
>>
>> Only two minor issues:
>>
>> #1
>> “Use the cursor keys to move around the installer's menus.”
>>
>> It needs to be “move around in the installer's menus.”
> 
> That explains why it sounded weird to me.
> 
>> #2
>> “Remember that you can use [Ctrl]+[C] to abort the installation at any
>> time.”
>>
>> I would omit “Remember that” at the beginning of the sentence. It's not
>> wrong, but it simply seems a bit weird. I could try to explain that
>> further, if you're interested.
> 
> http://git.savannah.nongnu.org/cgit/dragora.git/commit/?id=210d3ccc855e1b1e54d92758e656c5166ed53b36

Ok, that one is good to go now, if you ask me.

> Are there other messages you would like to improve?.

Yes, there are. I'll stick to the scheme of one thread per message. Just
a minute.


Michael



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