Comments and questions by slide as I go over it.
* Slide 9: despite your use of it, there is no word "noone". It should be "no one". * Slide 12: Not really important, but I am not seeing how you get to these goals from your previous slides, especially "access multiple releases simultaneous". I know that is the goal of EFS, but I am unclear how your previous slides are addressed by these bullets. Perhaps go back and make sure each point is addressed as an issue? I may have just missed it. * Slide 13: Worth mentioning that EFS 3 is alpha? Is that later? Is that fact counter-productive? * Slide 15: nice! I like that /efs/home is there. * Slide 20: Is this too deep for your audience. Probably not, but something to consider. * Slide 23: Do you want to mention Kerberos here? Is GSSAPI Kerberos? * Slide 30: Doesn't the access have to be delegated? You can "can"; should it be "must"? Is there a parameter you can set where this is turned off? * Slide 32: are these items (Moose, DBIx::Class) still "bleeding" edge? I thought it was pretty standard at this point. * Slide 33: Do you want to mention the difficulty of getting Perl into EFS during installation? Any fun stories? Anything about EFS Deploy? Worth mentioning? Otherwise, good flow; sounds good! From: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Phillip Moore Sent: Wednesday, June 16, 2010 2:35 PM To: EFS core development list Subject: [EFS-dev] YAPC::NA 2010 EFS Talk Draft Here's the draft of the talk for next week. As usual, compressing everything EFS is and does into a 40 minute talk isn't easy. I'm going to spend some more time on this on Friday, and probably do some last minute tweaking next week. I think that rather than more detail about how EFS works, a couple of real world use cases would be helpful. I'm thinking about a couple of slides about how gcc is integrated will be interesting, as well as a couple that show how EFS itself is managed out of /efs/dist, in particular how we use releasealiases to manage upgrades. Anyway, feedback (even typos :-P) most welcome.
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