I think it looks good. If you need time, I think you can reduce the beginning 11 slides to a review and be done with it (this is just a suggestion if you are looking to cut). Your heading on slides 11 and 12, "History: the solution" has an odd ring to it. Perhaps "Proposed solutions"? "Early solutions"? I do understand you are coming from "History: The Problem". Perhaps it is the "History" party this is bothering me. Maybe just "The Problem" and "Early Solutions" might be better.
From: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Phillip Moore Sent: Friday, June 18, 2010 1:45 PM To: EFS core development list Subject: Re: [EFS-dev] YAPC::NA 2010 EFS Talk Draft Here's that latest draft. I just ran through this entire thing, and it took me 32 minutes. This incorporates most of the changes you all suggested. On Thu, Jun 17, 2010 at 6:21 PM, Phillip Moore <[email protected]> wrote: ALL of the suggestions you all made are excellent. I am going to make an attempt to fit them all into the talk, and then do a dry run tomorrow to see how long it works out to be. I'll have another draft by EOB tomorrow. The real problems is that there's too many cool things about EFS for a 40 minute talk, but I'll do my best. I have to avoid (a) too many tangents and funny stories, and (b) talking too damn fast. On Wed, Jun 16, 2010 at 2:35 PM, Phillip Moore <[email protected]> wrote: Here's the draft of the talk for next week. As usual, compressing everything EFS is and does into a 40 minute talk isn't easy. I'm going to spend some more time on this on Friday, and probably do some last minute tweaking next week. I think that rather than more detail about how EFS works, a couple of real world use cases would be helpful. I'm thinking about a couple of slides about how gcc is integrated will be interesting, as well as a couple that show how EFS itself is managed out of /efs/dist, in particular how we use releasealiases to manage upgrades. Anyway, feedback (even typos :-P) most welcome.
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