I made an attempt to revise and merge, and also to reduce the use of the first person on the main page. Check out http://wiki.electorama.com/wiki/Simple_Optionally-Delegated_Approval#Opinionated_sales_pitches_.28hard_sell.29 to see the results.
2011/7/12 Jameson Quinn <jameson.qu...@gmail.com> > I like the overall structure, but the syntax could certainly be edited for > clarity. Shorter sentences with a few concrete examples will feel simpler, > even if it ends up longer. I'll make an attempt later. > > Also, I think that the two pages should be merged, with your page as the > introductory section of mine. > > JQ > > > 2011/7/12 Andy Jennings <electi...@jenningsstory.com> > >> I agree with Kevin that the existing SODA page on the wiki is _not_ for >> novices. >> >> I created a simplified page: >> http://wiki.electorama.com/wiki/Simple_Optionally-Delegated_Approval_(simplified) >> >> Feel free to edit, but let's add to it as little as possible, or even take >> some away if we can. >> >> Andy >> >> >> >> On Fri, Jul 8, 2011 at 4:27 PM, Kevin Venzke <step...@yahoo.fr> wrote: >> >>> --- En date de : Ven 8.7.11, Toby Pereira <tdp2...@yahoo.co.uk> a >>> écrit : >>> The thing about SODA is that it's harder to "get" than Approval Voting. >>> I haven't exactly read through all the posts on it here thoroughly but >>> I've looked at the page - http://wiki.electorama.com/wiki/ >>> Simple_Optionally-Delegated_Approval - and I do find myself >>> thinking "What?" >>> [end quote] >>> >>> >>> Well hmm. I'm kind of looking at this article as a collection of things >>> that have been said by SODA people. As a neutral intro to the method >>> for people who don't know whether the inventors have any idea what they >>> are talking about, it's kind of terrible. >>> >>> In particular that intro paragraph... I didn't want to go on. >>> >>> "I'm going to abandon the neutral voice and talk as myself." >>> >>> Ahaha. >>> >>> Maybe the article should be forked. Have one concise, neutral version >>> (like neutral neutral), and then the exciting one. >>> >>> Kevin >>> ---- >>> Election-Methods mailing list - see http://electorama.com/em for list >>> info >>> >> >> >> ---- >> Election-Methods mailing list - see http://electorama.com/em for list >> info >> >> >
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