Alright, here is my big list of nitpicks. If there are no objections I
could fix them tomorrow or this week-end.
Also, I'd like to retroactively correct the previous year report's date
to reduce confusion.
Page 1
- Correct my name for photo attribution
- Add/correct credits for coordinators, proofreading, design?
Page 3
- "whose names can be found on the next page" << "whose names can be
seen at the beginning of this document"
- depending on available space: restore paragraph breaks, adjust
paragraphs spacing [low priority]
- fix the bulleted list & indents/alignment [low priority]
4
- "Here are some glimpses into what we have achieved in 2013-14." >> I
suppose we do mean "2014-15" for hackfests?
- "Builder, the IDE specific made for GNOME development," >> Not sure
about "specific"; "specifically"?
10
- "Became clear to Board that" >> "Became clear to the Board that"
- Should "Pam" be replaced by "Pamela" (full length) everywhere?
11
- 2nd paragraph: "to the situation at hand as they could in order to"
>> add a comma after "could", or remove "at hand"?
- 3rd paragraph: "Family" is capitalized, is that intentional?
12
- 3rd paragraph: "Keynotes" is capitalized, is that normal?
- technically, it's "elementary OS" instead of "Elementary OS", but it
would look weird in the middle of a sentence where all the other names
are capitalized... thoughts?
13
- "All three keynotes were very given to packed rooms and rousing
applause." >> "very given"..?
- 5th paragraph: "gstreamer" -> "GStreamer", "gpg" -> "GPG"
16
- 3rd paragraph, "more reliab predictably", I suppose I should take out
the "reliab"
17
- update the Collabora logo
- I believe SFLC was no longer listed on the foundation pages in 2014
- Year should be 2014, not 2013
18-20
- Add styling for the headings
- Fix the missing special character for "Micha" Bartoszkiewicz (again)
Hopefully that's all that's left? Besides figuring out if we can afford
bespoke cover artwork this year :)
_______________________________________________
engagement-list mailing list
engagement-list@gnome.org
https://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/engagement-list
